Wah, this was such a bittersweet throw-back into Water. Absolutely beautiful, and I love it, but sudden memory crashes of Water's Shinra are delightful in the most sadistic way - and Zexion and Demyx's death of the saddest.

Aw - everything about these two is so trajically romantic. I loved water and this is a great companion piece :) Awesomeness.

Omg, I just finished reading Water 10 minutes ago... literally. This is exactly how I imagined it!(Well, not exactly, because I could never think of anything like this...)But, it doesn't matter, great job!

So, I've reached a point where I don't know quite what to say. But I'm smiling - this awesome, awesome smile. That was so beautifully written, and so sweetly sad. I love it times a million plus one. You got Zexion so perfectly, his despairing, chaotic thoughts when he wanted to die, and then the utter hopelessness of realising that he hadn't. And then Dem enters, and oh, wow. That was just gorgeous. I'm reliving the ending of Water in a way that I didn't when I wrote it, because at the time, it was sort of clinical for me, you know? As the writer, I didn't feel it terribly keenly, since I was *creating* the sadness. But this really, really makes me feel it. To see things from Zexion's point of view is just very lovely, very tragic.
Man, thank you so, so much. This is by far the best present :) I'm currently in, "Must. Not. Start. Crying." mode :P *hugs*

Nice story. I'm working on a fanfiction as well. Check it out sometime when you have time.

0_0 oh wow. this was just absolutely beautiful. very sad, but beautiful. I loved this. And trust me when I say i'll be reading this many times.