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| TillITryIllNeverKnow 2008-05-21 ch 12,  | abuseBravo. Nicely done. I only wish Arwen could have known and met her parents...even as an adult. I can't wait for your next story, by the way. |
| HaChosenOne 2008-05-21 ch 12, | abuseI like that ending, but I'd have loved it if Arwen could meet her parents? So some sort of sequel? If I ask very nicely? |
| ape975 2008-05-21 ch 12, | abuseawh! That was so sad! I love this story and will definately read the sequel! Can't wait! |
| MissWickedWitch 2008-05-21 ch 12, | abuseaww.. that made me cry such a lovely ending |
| ape975 2008-05-18 ch 11, | abusewow poor arwen ;( really good update! cant wait for the last one! hope she gets to meet her parents! |
| greengirl16 2008-05-18 ch 11, | abuseaw... this is so good and so sad. I can't wait to read more :D. Update soon |
| TillITryIllNeverKnow 2008-05-18 ch 11, | abuseSuperb! I lov it. Excellent teaser at the end, by the way! I also enjoyed "Dodo" nice touch. Can't wait for your next update. |
| TillITryIllNeverKnow 2008-05-15 ch 10, | abuseSo sad! Impressive, but sad. Thank you. It all makes sense, even if I like happily ever after. Update soon. I love your world. |
| Curlycurlz 2008-05-15 ch 10, | abuseI assume this is the end? Well done. You've wrapped it up nicely. For future reference... You might want to avoid using the words "Flashback" and "End of flashback". You can do the job just as well by putting in a break between the two paragraphs, like a line or * or _-_-_ or something, and then putting the flashback in italics. |
| ape975 2008-05-15 ch 10, | abuseaww too bad they cant raise arwen! thats sad :( wonder how glindas handling her... cant wait for next epilogue! |
| wickedfan101 2008-05-14 ch 9, anon. | abuseanother very good chapter, but one question, has she really been melted in this, or is it the same thing with the trap door as in the musical? |
| musicfan1207 2008-05-14 ch 9, | abuseMore Please! |
| TillITryIllNeverKnow 2008-05-13 ch 9, | abuseSo sad! Poor Elphaba, poor Yanter, poor Arwen. I want to cry! Well done. Lots of emotion, lots of angst! Please update soon. The story is wonderful |
| ape975 2008-05-13 ch 9, | abusecute story i like it :) |
| TillITryIllNeverKnow 2008-05-09 ch 8, | abusePerfect, as always. You make me feel all Elphaba's angst and pain. I worry about Glinda sometimes, though (in any story,not just yours) she can be so slow on the pickup sometimes! Nicely done. I'll be sorry when this story is over,have yo considered a sequel? |