What I want to know is how this sounded in your head, because if it's better there, then it's perfect gold. (I still think the stuff that managed to make it out is gold, too, though.) Funny. And I don't even like SasuSaku.

Good job.

Rofl, that was great xD

Bwhahaha xD

xD that is hilario!

hahahhahaha! Had me alughing my ass off!

hahahhaa.

thank you for this :)

hahahaha

i'm still laughing about your fic

well my english is not like i would like

(it really sucks .

I love this story! Sunlight Sasuke, Sunlight! (He would look even hotter with a tan!) yum...

-sasukeztruelove-chan

Sasuke is a socially disabled Albino :D

That was the cutest thing! I love it! XD

i am totally stalking your ff account, but that doesn't really matter. what the point is that osisdofinsdoif oh /naruto/, i am so dead.

Funny!i liked this story a lot :)

If that sounded better in your head, then it must have been a helluva oneshot! That was an AWESOME story! The dialogue completely made sense and it was clear who was talking. The part with Naruto shouting over Sasuke in fear of being hit was HILARIOUS! So totally faved!

Haha. The ending cracked me up. XD

Hahahaha. That was absoultely HILARIOUS. I'm still laughing over here.

Wow- especially the "mismatched/albino" parts. That really had me laughing. And what's better is it's even REAL- I have these kinds of conversations with my frineds (granted, there's not secret lusting between us girls, but whatever. The concept's the same).

And besides which, Nartuo is hilarious. As always. And he's even more funny as CAPSLOCK!Naruto. Bwahaha. (I especially liked the repressed!avenger hormones... cue Madame rofllamo-ing a second night in a row).

Excellent job. You're hilarious and amazing. :D

hilarious! my favorite parts are when Sas and Sak talk around Naruto's rants.

Shut up, Naruto, the grown-ups are talking right now. Now. Finish your sentence, Sasuke-kun.

i'm going to see if you have more stories now!