OMG ! Love it ! I want to be Bella in that dream ! xD
The twist in the end is mean but kinda good. That's like the first Team Jacob Fanfic I really really like. Not even the original Twilight is that good. This is just like TDDOT, it tears you inside apart. Can't wait to read the other amazing fanfics you've written.
xoxo Bananacupcake09

My god, you write excellent smut!

The fact that he's dreaming justifies in my mind the fact that I was rooting for him... even though it will never happen. I wouldn't mind seeing more of these dreams...

Thank you for another wonderful glimpse into your imagination!

SSVD - I loved this little story. I am a big Jacob fan and love to see him get his :) thanks!

Um, damn, that was both hot and beautifully written. After I finished it, I had to immediately scroll back up and reread it. So, so good.

Well, ahem! I got this link from Blue. She told me it was one of, if not the best bit of Jacob love in fan fiction and I have to just about agree! I don't read a lot of fan fic because it's just too hard for me to do it. But when someone gets it spot on. like you have here, I can't ignore it. I really enjoyed this!

Very true to character...*sigh* Poor Jacob!

kinky.

ahh i love jacob! and his aggresiveness. to bad that didn't accualy happen...
haha the ending was so funny with sam

I found this after it was mentioned in the foreword to Pregnant Vampire Bella Joins The Army...and im so glad i did.

Sigh, i love Jake.

End of story.

ah! i loved it. i wish it was true. beautiful!

Damn...I feel bad that was just a dream, despite the fact that I'm on Team Edward. I sort of wish it hadn't ended so quickly...you write GOOD smut.

Whew! Who knew wolves were so hot!

*GASPS* That. Was. FANTASTIC! Superb writing, flawless characterization of Jake, and holy crow *snort* was that HAWT, while still totally in canon! (Bonus points for finding a legit reason for Bella to respond to him!)

I stumbled across this, and now I have to dive into everything else you've written!

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE!

This is good...really good! But I'm glad its just a dream, because some day Jacob will imprint and Bella + Edward are the perfect couple!

And it was hot...and I feel sorry for Jacob, having to think of her that way without ever having her...

I thought you would PM me when you had written something! Jeeze! Well, wasn't that hot!! I am telling you I fully expect you to be writing something akin to BDB and getting published one of these days. So call me kinky but I liked how you started out with Jake in wolf form. (But then you know I liked the whole Rhage thing.) Well done SSVD!!