 cheng 2009-06-30 . chapter 4aw. kawaii she's falling in love with him. heehee. YAY. |
 EverFallin'. 2008-08-08 . chapter 9its pretty god but i think u should maybe describe the kisses more...
ohh well just my opinion |
 brokenshadow23 2008-06-22 . chapter 9Eriol... He is so sweet.
Ahehe...
Nice ending... It was sad for Tomoyo but happy that she ended up to Eriol. Ahehe... Not like my first story that Sakura has to die.
SxS story? When? ahehe... I am looking forward to it! n_n |
 brokenshadow23 2008-06-22 . chapter 8Oh... So that is why.
All right. I will already read the last chap. Ahehehe...
I am so happy for the two! hehe... At least, they have already confessed. |
 brokenshadow23 2008-06-22 . chapter 7Wah!
I love that scene!
Ahehe...
I really like how Tomoyo confessed..!
This story is fantastic! Ahehe... |
 brokenshadow23 2008-06-22 . chapter 6This chapter is so sad. Eriol left... -sniff- -sniff-
What's up with him? Why did he leave all of a sudden? Tsk. Anyway, I am going to read the next chap now. So that I will know the reason why. Ahehe!
n_n |
 brokenshadow23 2008-06-21 . chapter 5Whoa...
If I was at that moment( the scence after Eriol and Tomoyo kissed), I would have cheered for Tomoyo! Ahaha! But I do feel sorry for Eriol.
Hope they would get along soon. Ahehe... |
 brokenshadow23 2008-06-21 . chapter 4Your story is totally amazing!
I really like how they are acting. Ahehe...
n_n |
 brokenshadow23 2008-06-21 . chapter 3Err... This story did remind me of someone. Ahehe...
Anyway, great story you have here... ;p |
 brokenshadow23 2008-06-21 . chapter 2Amph! Eriol's act reminded me of SOMEONE...
But honestly, that scene is the reason why I will read the next chap already! hehe... |
 brokenshadow23 2008-06-21 . chapter 1Aww... How cute! Aheheh...
Sorry for this late review.. I thought you were still working on this one. It is just that I was too busy at school so i didn't have free time to read.
I really like it..! Ahehe... And I wish I could write well like you do.
n_n |
 hushedthoughts 2008-06-17 . chapter 9that was a very sweet story! i loved it! u did a great job! this is one of the best i've read so far! keep up the good work! |
 SilentCynara 2008-06-14 . chapter 9Okay, I know betas aren't supposed to review but who cares? XD
I really loved Tomoyo's thoughts at the beginning; they cap off a short but complicated emotional journey the two have taken.
Sakura's comment about Tomoyo forever calling Syaoran "Li-kun" was LOL! So having her call Eriol by his name is swooningly sweet ^_^
I like that it's a happy yet realistic ending: "She wasn’t happy, necessarily, but she was content. She still had many things to do before her life could be restored, and her company could get over the losses. Her mother had gone. But in her place, she had learned a lesson and found the love of Eriol." And his love was there for quite some time now ^_^ how kawaii!
And thank you for pointing out my evilness. I'd do an evil Tomoyo laugh but someone else has a patent on that LOL!
Congratulations on achieving what you wanted in your profile: your first complete story, and I agree with the other reviewers--this was wonderful to read! |
 hamxham 2008-06-13 . chapter 9it's finished! the ending was really sweet... just like the rest of the fic, too!
good job and i'll be looking forward to your next fanfics! |
 hamxham 2008-06-13 . chapter 8omg, its dedicated to me? ah thank you so much! seriously, i feel all happy now =3 |