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cheng
2009-06-30 . chapter 4
aw. kawaii she's falling in love with him. heehee. YAY.
EverFallin'.
2008-08-08 . chapter 9
its pretty god but i think u should maybe describe the kisses more...

ohh well just my opinion
brokenshadow23
2008-06-22 . chapter 9
Eriol... He is so sweet.
Ahehe...
Nice ending... It was sad for Tomoyo but happy that she ended up to Eriol. Ahehe... Not like my first story that Sakura has to die.

SxS story? When? ahehe... I am looking forward to it! n_n
brokenshadow23
2008-06-22 . chapter 8
Oh... So that is why.
All right. I will already read the last chap. Ahehehe...
I am so happy for the two! hehe... At least, they have already confessed.
brokenshadow23
2008-06-22 . chapter 7
Wah!
I love that scene!
Ahehe...
I really like how Tomoyo confessed..!

This story is fantastic! Ahehe...
brokenshadow23
2008-06-22 . chapter 6
This chapter is so sad. Eriol left... -sniff- -sniff-

What's up with him? Why did he leave all of a sudden? Tsk. Anyway, I am going to read the next chap now. So that I will know the reason why. Ahehe!

n_n
brokenshadow23
2008-06-21 . chapter 5
Whoa...

If I was at that moment( the scence after Eriol and Tomoyo kissed), I would have cheered for Tomoyo! Ahaha! But I do feel sorry for Eriol.

Hope they would get along soon. Ahehe...
brokenshadow23
2008-06-21 . chapter 4
Your story is totally amazing!

I really like how they are acting. Ahehe...

n_n
brokenshadow23
2008-06-21 . chapter 3
Err... This story did remind me of someone. Ahehe...

Anyway, great story you have here... ;p
brokenshadow23
2008-06-21 . chapter 2
Amph! Eriol's act reminded me of SOMEONE...

But honestly, that scene is the reason why I will read the next chap already! hehe...
brokenshadow23
2008-06-21 . chapter 1
Aww... How cute! Aheheh...

Sorry for this late review.. I thought you were still working on this one. It is just that I was too busy at school so i didn't have free time to read.

I really like it..! Ahehe... And I wish I could write well like you do.

n_n
hushedthoughts
2008-06-17 . chapter 9
that was a very sweet story! i loved it! u did a great job! this is one of the best i've read so far! keep up the good work!
SilentCynara
2008-06-14 . chapter 9
Okay, I know betas aren't supposed to review but who cares? XD

I really loved Tomoyo's thoughts at the beginning; they cap off a short but complicated emotional journey the two have taken.

Sakura's comment about Tomoyo forever calling Syaoran "Li-kun" was LOL! So having her call Eriol by his name is swooningly sweet ^_^

I like that it's a happy yet realistic ending: "She wasn’t happy, necessarily, but she was content. She still had many things to do before her life could be restored, and her company could get over the losses. Her mother had gone. But in her place, she had learned a lesson and found the love of Eriol." And his love was there for quite some time now ^_^ how kawaii!

And thank you for pointing out my evilness. I'd do an evil Tomoyo laugh but someone else has a patent on that LOL!

Congratulations on achieving what you wanted in your profile: your first complete story, and I agree with the other reviewers--this was wonderful to read!
hamxham
2008-06-13 . chapter 9
it's finished! the ending was really sweet... just like the rest of the fic, too!

good job and i'll be looking forward to your next fanfics!
hamxham
2008-06-13 . chapter 8
omg, its dedicated to me? ah thank you so much! seriously, i feel all happy now =3
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