yes yes yes! this is exactly how i thought of these two when i first read them in the manga. i honestly thought kuro would be the bottom... but then fandom erupted and everyone pairs them as kuro as top.

since kuro is such as control freak, i thought it would be sweet if he (willingly) lost control in only one place: bed. and who would do that for him? well, fai of course. this was perfect!

That was really good! I liked it a lot! Great job!

Deep stuff. This is a very interesting way of looking at Kurogane. I like it though. You're right, it isn't OOC, and I think you did a great job showing that. Nice work. =3

I know I've read this before, possibly on lj lol.

But kya! I love it :]

I agree, it isnt ooc and you did a great job with it :D

^^ ...Yay.

Excellently done. I love Kurogane as bottom, particularly the way you've portrayed it. These two are so much on equal footing in my mind, that there's no real seme or uke - just two men who could go either way. You've done a great job of expressing this. Thanks. ^_^

wow! this is my first reading kuro bottom and i kind of enjoyed it. i guess love in itself is OOC :) nicely written

Wow 8O That was amazingly in character and very deep xD
Really great job >D I mean, really :)

Very Nicely done, it's so hard to write uke Kurogane, but you did a great job! ^^

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So, I usually don't read lemons. They tend to be... silly. But this was more of a character piece than a sex scene, so I read it and liked it. Good job.