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| nikki.02 2008-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseGreat fluff! I wish THIS could've happened in the show instead. |
| marialisa 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseLoved this. You captured the tension between them wonderfully well. |
| Addicted412 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseCute. :) Very in-character. :D |
| EmpireClover 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was brilliant! I love how they are stuck, very close to each other, but not able to communicate with words. Excellent! |
| SallyJetson 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseAh I really liked this. Sometimes tight places without options force people to admit their true feelings. I loved the slightly humorous ending. It seems as if D/L are back on firm footing. |
| ReJo 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseVery vivid. And I *love* the dialog at the end. It's so in-character for both of them. |
| wjobsessed 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseYou write such great DL. And that voyeuristic spce of time(even though it was dark)made it so much hotter. Thanks :) |
| kcatlin 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI would LOVE to see this happen!! |
| JennCorinthos 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseLOL... This was cute and funny... JENNIFER |
| sophiiex 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseHehee :) Loved it! o think you did well addressing the Ruben thing, Danny forgeting Lindsays Birthday well at the start :) & the ending made me Chuckle :D xoxo |
| jordinajamaica 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE IT! The end is AWESOME! GREAT JOB! REALLY!!:D |
| mabelreid 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseThis was very funny and so well written. I could see it all taking place in my head and that was quite an image I have to say. At least Danny got to forget his troubles for awhile. I like the last exchange between then, that was really funny. Excellent one shot. |