Great story, very emotional, though I must confess to not understanding the italic parts properly. It was very good though.
"There are no lions! There are no lions!... Just spaceships!"
Lol, one of the best lines ever.

oh, this was just a brilliant fanfic! i really loved the whole perception and idea of using the off-island future... then the past... then jack's thoughts... loved it. and you managed to write it so well too!

He nods and now he realises that he was too stubborn, he was always to busy and he now does realise that still; he doesn’t have anything to live for. He doesn’t have her. He cant do it without her either, he cant find them alone, because he isn’t the hero. In the worlds eyes, she is. - oh!! that's so sad! i guess that jack did really mess up in the end what with jumping off the bridge and everything... but i still feel sorry for him not being able to get together with kate in the end.

and the ending... so horrible! i mean like not horrible writing, just a horribly sad ending that's all. ;) no if anything, the writing was the best here. :)
great story!
bonboni
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Hey!

This was a very touching chapter, feel very sorry for Jack, but as you said, nothing every ends happily ever after.

Well done, this was a great serial!!

This was a great chap! :D

I loved that Sawyer was in it!

Aw, you did a great job but I'm so sad it's over! :(

The end?! noo!
i was all getting ready for a long, long fanfic!
ah well, it was awesome anyway! ;)
but uh, this means you need to post something else for me to read.

yes. ;)
For she is the lie and he is the truth, but its hard coping with it, and it shows on him, on his actions. Who’d have thought a lie was so easily kept?- ooh, that was beautiful! totally how i'd think she'd see it.

the school run she sets two mugs on the worktop just in case. - god, girl, thats sad! he's gonna join her for coffee though yeah? eeh. i didn't think so.

“….There are no lions”- i think we got another friend for kayla here ;)

i'm a skater, so i can wonder. but, i'm a skater just cause i think they're awesome together.
whether they're in a relationship or not ;) wow, how open minded am i? ;)

He doesn’t hear his body hit the pavement with the most haunting thud and crack, but the women on the bridge does - god, is he dead?! oh he is o_O
OMG. why'd you do that to me?! :O
beautiful ending though, really, really was awesome. o_O
anyway, that was a great fic! :)
this means you need to go write me lots more now pls ;) anyway, awesomeness ;)
xox Katie

very intense. I really like the story, its dark, but i like the spin. twisted.

thanks for the good read, please continue to write more.

Hey! This is great! Loved this chap, very touching and I think Aaron's very cute. The 'beautiful mess' aswell, very sweet!

Definetly worth another chapter! Keep up the good work!

what? so he's awake now? so the italics were his dream but now he's actually woken up? if so, then that's great! :D i can't wait to see what happens next!
i just hope that it's not part of the false awakening because he really needs to get up! kate is destroying herself, even aaron can see it. :(
update soon please!
bonboni
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That was SO great! Jack's false awakenings are kind of sad! Really sad actually lol.

And aw! I feel so bad for Kate! Aw!!

Update soon!

... you got him reading to her.
*squees* you know Jate's not my natural -aha- ship, but AW!

His black car is pulled up outside her home again. He wonders why she never sees it?- thats actually pretty sad :(

She grabs her bag along with his, that’s covered in stickers and writing- the thing i love about your writing is that you put those little details, that are so pretty! And realistic, i mean, even now i draw little hearts and swirls on the knees of my jeans when i'm bored, and you don't even wanna see the state of my bags, but aww! :)

OMG is he waking up?! :O UPDATE SOON pls ;)

but. now. i have to share this with you. it may be inapropreiate, but hey, i can't spell.
anyway.
is it just me, or does Jack remind you of a hamster?
the phrase hamster in the headlights, does that ring a bell?
it just.. he's so hamster-ish.
having said that, is it hamster in the headlights? or deer in the headlights? ... hmm. Rabbit in the headlights?

whatever, he's a hamster in the headlights
i'm not slagging him off, i'm just noticing the resembalence.
anyway, back to the reveiw ;)
that was awesome! :O update soon! you must o_O ah, she read to him :D
xox Katie

Hi, I'm glad that you continued. And a long chapter is always a good choice. :-)
I like it so far and I'm glad, that you wrote, that the italics was Jack's dreams. Before it I was a little bit confused, but you explained it, so I understand it.
Keep going!

Hey! Sorry it took me long to review this, been out of the country all this week.

Really good! I really enjoyed it, very well written! You can write both great Skate and great Jate, which few writers can do well. Well done!

Definitly good, and worth more! I REALLY LIKE IT!

Good fic!
Can't wait to see what happens next!

=]

oh... it's very interesting! i didn't know what a false awakening was so thanks for the explanation. ;) so jack's the one who is dreaming that he's awake, right? poor guy... seems sad that he's turned into a man so weak. :(
update soon please!
bonboni
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