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MarbleGlove
2009-11-29 . chapter 1
Wow. This is a wonderful look at these characters. Thanks for sharing.
Rocky235
2009-11-28 . chapter 1
I saw your story on a list from phiel (sp).

I enjoyed your story. The scene with Harry's brother was the best.

Thank you for having shared this with me.
Lady Knight Keladry
2009-11-24 . chapter 1
Aw, it's such a shame that he's been through so much. I'm glad that Harry starts to thaw. Nice fic.
X59
2009-11-20 . chapter 1
Perfect and I loved how you managed the characters.
OlivineWK
2009-11-16 . chapter 1
Just brilliant. With your writing, you can really feel the emotions that each character feels, even though it's all written from James' POV. At the same time, while reading this, I was listening to 'Central Park' from the King Kong movie, and that really added to the atmosphere as well (music helps!). The little details that James made note of (having to do with Harry), and his rather understanding character really made him shine in this fic, I thought. It gives him a more realistic and human face; that people tend to notice more about what/who they're so focused on and how far they'd go for it/them.
Piole
2009-11-15 . chapter 1
Great fic, very realistic. I like the fact that there it`s NOT a happily ever after reunion with the other Potters. Great job.
vampirelf
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
brilliantly written. the characterizations and the rough view of harry from another perspective is great, especially the gradual breakdown of how harry adapts into their world. the pacing and emotions were spot-on, and it's difficult to give a proper review that isn't all "aiejpoiaer awesome yay" and garbling.

<3
Voice of the Nephilim
2009-10-31 . chapter 1
An twas it did pass that the Potter elder
traveled to another world of mirrored event
why, oh why didn't he use the "Avada Kedrava"?
indeed why would he choose his wrists to lament?

Despite this admittedly minor flaw
this story could make an icy heart thaw
such a strange world he found post-disaster
that his kin likened him to a Potions master
bambieyes1234
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed that -Snape and Harry's little not-friendship made me bounce up and down happily. It was very nice and interesting. :D
bambieyes1234
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed that -Snape and Harry's little not-friendship made me bounce up and down happily. It was very nice and interesting. :D
Sony Boy
2009-10-21 . chapter 1
HOLY 0.0!

I've never seen a Ulternate dimension story in James pov. In fact I've never seen it in anyone other than Harry's or Sirius'.

This is amazing and unique-to me-and just blows me away.
nth-x
2009-10-18 . chapter 1
THIS story was gorgeous and incredible and moving and, and, and...

I absolutely loved it. The scene with Aaron and Harry was inspired. And watching the new dimension story through James' eye was a nice change of pace.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
PeanutTree
2009-10-16 . chapter 1
Wow. That was incredible. I have to say that I liked this much better than the happy-go-lucky time-travel stories in which Harry arrives just in time reveal his mysteries and then save the day. Even though this version was more raw and more emotional, it was also more real. I loved it.
treeshie
2009-10-08 . chapter 1
nothing but beautiful.

thanks for writing.
Steven Kodaly
2009-10-06 . chapter 1
This is certainly an interesting take on the notion of "Harry jumps timelines!"
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