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| Ash of Mine 2008-08-17 ch 1,  | abuse:love: simply realistic and beautiful, it's angsty (but not bad angst!), and cookie for Aaron!! (makes me wish for more... ;p) thank you for sharing ^o^ |
| reader 2008-08-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh... oh this is beautiful I can really FEEL this story. you did an amazing job! |
| frzntears 2008-08-12 ch 1, | abuseOriginal. Awesome, could you do a one-shot scene between Snape, Harry, and Sirius? Just thought it'd be interesting. Maybe throw a parody about the father-line? |
| P.E.E.V.S.Y. 2008-08-06 ch 1, | abuseOh... I really like this. :) It's great. Good job. |
| Comicrileef 2008-07-29 ch 1, | abuseThat's it . . .? It was really, really good -- you should turn it into a longer story. *comicrileef* |
| Bil 2008-07-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is *beautiful*. I wish I could give you some intelligent feedback, but I'm just too blown away by this to find any words. I love your characterisations and the interactions between Harry and the denizens of this worlds. And how Harry's fitting in isn't easy and maybe never will be... but you still end on a note of hope. The last sentence, where Harry doesn't flinch, is a brilliant illustration of the change that has slowly been unfolding throughout the story. This is an amazing story. Thank you for writing it. |
| ladylookslikeadude 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseCoolness. |
| Lunarmercury 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseI'm afraid I don't have much to say in this review, but your story was so heartbreakingly bittersweet that it made me cry, and I couldn't walk away from such a well-written story without letting you know that I, at least, was really impacted by it. |
| keatlin 2008-07-15 ch 1, | abuseI love it! Brilliant! Can't wait to read more from you. |
| EvilRavenClaw 2008-07-10 ch 1, | abuseOh I'm slightly dissapointed that this is only a one-shot! You should've made this novel length! I can see interestin ideas coming through and it's one of the best dimensional fics I've read. |
| sam 2008-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abusei just loved it! beautiful and amazing. great playing of a scenario, and kinda loved that you kept it short, i don't know if it wouldve worked as a novella. |
| Shiruy 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abuseVery nice story! It's nice that you adressed all the issues that so often get overlooked. You kept the reactions of people very realistic. ^^*fav* |
| The Sleeping Creature 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abusethis was absolutely fabulous. I love the rehashing of the old cliche, and I really like your characterizations. Much more realistic. |
| haphazard1 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abuseThis was very interesting. I like the brief format -- it works really well at getting the major points across, without spending thousands of words on all the in-between stuff. |
| cephygnus 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseI like that. |