Reviews for Edge of Reason

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Anon 2008-08-16 ch 2, anon.	abuseGood quality SakuSasu. Nicely done.
Kane Shi Megami 2008-08-04 ch 2,	abuse(and not because he was on the ground struggling to breathe.) Denial is a wonderful thing Sasuke. I know it had everything to do with that. XD KSM
Kane Shi Megami 2008-08-04 ch 1,	abuseOh I was so scared I wasn't going to be able to review this because I'm damn sure I've read it multiple times :). VERY GOOD WORK. I hate reading stories about Sakura throwing herself at his feet and this one was perfect characterization of Sasuke and Sakura. XD I can't wait to read more. KSM
jellygrl 2008-07-19 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoyed this chapter. There's so much tension between the two of them, exactly as I would expect there to be after such a long time has passed since they've been together. I'm really sorry to hear you're not continuing this as a story. I feel like there's so much potential in this. Reconsider? Haha. Great job.
Neon Genesis 2008-06-19 ch 2,	abuseSasuke is very realistic and in character for this, me thinks. You have a beautiful writing style and a way with words. Update soon, please!
Soniya Himoura 2008-06-17 ch 2,	abuseits seems like a good story to be. i would wish and pray for u to make it such, but i do not want to be a begger.. but yeah its really good. and if u wanna make it somthign more...i'm chearing u on. lol
Aya8 2008-06-15 ch 2,	abuseThis was amazing! Please update! Please! I'm now reading three of your stories all incomplete, all fabulous, and all killing me with anticipation! Please!
Mystikwriter 2008-06-09 ch 2,	abusevery nice. I love the way his mind work. you really pegged him in this story.
graviola 2008-05-26 ch 2,	abuseOh Sasuke's pov, I really like how you write. Its steady and coherent with the caracther. The emotions are there,not too much or too little. Just the right amount. But I was kind of expecting you to go at least until he went to talk with Sakura. And I'm beyond gratefull that his thoughts didn't include just how awesome hot she was. But my favorite still is the 'everything'its very fitting of his personality. So I'm expecting more!Yeah!All reviews need to end with : UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!
Destiny1029 2008-05-18 ch 2,	abuseI love it, its the awkwardness that a true person would feel in that situation, although, I'm not sure how many cases of a michael jackson type predator taking a 13 year old kid, training him to kill his brother, and 2 friends going off on a journey to get him back there are... not sure there's many cases of that. haha Anyway wonderful! I love the Sasu/Saku interaction. Can't wait to read more, all of your works are fantastic!
cutecrazyice 2008-05-15 ch 2,	abuseNice! The two can be connected, actually, but if you read them separately, they're pretty good as well. :)
Havaru 2008-05-03 ch 2,	abuseThis collection of 'drabbles' is just plain amazing thus far. I'd like it to be made into a story still though, since it's got enough potential to become one without much force. Regardless, your writing style is absolutely fantastic; you manage to draw me in and keep me interested throughout each chapter :) I like your characterization of Sasuke and Sakura, both of them seem to be well in character in this; despite the odd situation of it. Definitely looking forward to seeing more chapters added to this. In the meantime, i'll check out some of your other writing (good god, i'm addicted to it now). +Favorite Story/Author/Alerts
animesweetie 2008-04-27 ch 2, anon.	abuseWow. Love it love it love it =] Well-written, as always. You know the characters so well, it's incredible. This is definitely a situation I can see happening in the manga. You put it into a much deeper perspective though. What you're writing is like...the time period from him coming back to them being together a few years later. But of course, the happily-ever-after thing doesn't come so easily and I think you are doing a really great job of telling their story =] Even if it is a few scattered drabbles =]
venus goddess 2008-04-23 ch 2,	abusei like this chappie more than the last one. And your sasuke mindset is getting better.
Cataracta 2008-04-23 ch 2,	abuseAbsolutely love these. I loved your stories, I'm loving your drabbles, I hope you keep writing them!

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