Really excellent introspection.

please update as soon as you can! :)

I didn't know you are writing for Naruto. I really adore your KK fics, and I am glad (ecstatic) that you are also writing for my most favorite pair. You also ship James/lily which is another favorite of mine. You are heaven sent!

I didn't know you are writing for Naruto. I really adore your KK fics, and I am glad (ecstatic) that you are also writing for my most favorite pair.

I like the way you write these characters, I'm justnsad that there is inky two chapters(((

Hope you will update this fic.

this is good

Your use of language in this piece is fantastic. The romance is just hinted at with well-placed phrases like "drank her in" and "gaze swallowed her whole". Subtle romance is the best romance - this is love. :)

I love your characterization of Sakura and Sasuke! I'll definitely be looking forward to an update. :)

i'm really excited for you to update this. you have a certain way about your writing that pulls the reader in. it's a certain depth that you really don't find a lot on this site anymore.

i really like your sasuke and sakura. they're very...realistic.

This is great! Please update soon!

I think you really thought out the characters very well, and how they would act in these situations, etc etc.

I just have one criticism: you're missing hyphens in your compound adjectives. There were a couple missing in the first chapter, and two in the second: "narrow-eyed determination and brain-numbing tenacity."

Besides that, you're doing great! I love your story, please keep writing!

I like this drabble collection, too! Thanks for writing!

I love the way you write... you are good with words... one of my favorites is your "Perfect in Weakness" story...( I read it everynow & then) and these drabbles are very good too. Please continue, don't stop.

I love SasuSaku stories a lot, so write more about them.

Thanks!

This little drabble of Sasusaku is awesome! it definitely isn't as fluffy as a lot of other drabble stories I've read in the past, but it sure as hell still keeps my attention span just as much, if not more. It's simply amazing. Continue to update, but take your time. I never would forcibly make anyone rush their work. quality wins over quantity, right?

Good quality SakuSasu. Nicely done.

(and not because he was on the ground struggling to breathe.) Denial is a wonderful thing Sasuke. I know it had everything to do with that. XD

KSM