|Reviews for Edge of Reason|
| Kane Shi Megami 8/4/08 . chapter 1
Oh I was so scared I wasn't going to be able to review this because I'm damn sure I've read it multiple times :). VERY GOOD WORK. I hate reading stories about Sakura throwing herself at his feet and this one was perfect characterization of Sasuke and Sakura. XD I can't wait to read more.
| ixr 7/19/08 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this chapter. There's so much tension between the two of them, exactly as I would expect there to be after such a long time has passed since they've been together.
I'm really sorry to hear you're not continuing this as a story. I feel like there's so much potential in this. Reconsider?
Haha. Great job.
| Neon Genesis 6/19/08 . chapter 2
Sasuke is very realistic and in character for this, me thinks. You have a beautiful writing style and a way with words. Update soon, please!
| Soniya Himoura 6/17/08 . chapter 2
its seems like a good story to be. i would wish and pray for u to make it such, but i do not want to be a begger.. but yeah its really good. and if u wanna make it somthign more...i'm chearing u on. lol
| Aya8 6/15/08 . chapter 2
This was amazing! Please update! Please! I'm now reading three of your stories all incomplete, all fabulous, and all killing me with anticipation! Please!
| Mystikwriter 6/9/08 . chapter 2
very nice. I love the way his mind work. you really pegged him in this story.
| graviola 5/26/08 . chapter 2
Oh Sasuke's pov, I really like how you write. Its steady and coherent with the caracther. The emotions are there,not too much or too little. Just the right amount.
But I was kind of expecting you to go at least until he went to talk with Sakura.
And I'm beyond gratefull that his thoughts didn't include just how awesome hot she was.
But my favorite still is the 'everything'its very fitting of his personality.
So I'm expecting more!Yeah!All reviews need to end with : UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!
| Destiny1029 5/18/08 . chapter 2
I love it, its the awkwardness that a true person would feel in that situation, although, I'm not sure how many cases of a michael jackson type predator taking a 13 year old kid, training him to kill his brother, and 2 friends going off on a journey to get him back there are... not sure there's many cases of that. haha
Anyway wonderful! I love the Sasu/Saku interaction. Can't wait to read more, all of your works are fantastic!
| cutecrazyice 5/15/08 . chapter 2
Nice! The two can be connected, actually, but if you read them separately, they're pretty good as well. :)
| Havaru 5/3/08 . chapter 2
This collection of 'drabbles' is just plain amazing thus far. I'd like it to be made into a story still though, since it's got enough potential to become one without much force. Regardless, your writing style is absolutely fantastic; you manage to draw me in and keep me interested throughout each chapter :) I like your characterization of Sasuke and Sakura, both of them seem to be well in character in this; despite the odd situation of it.
Definitely looking forward to seeing more chapters added to this. In the meantime, i'll check out some of your other writing (good god, i'm addicted to it now). Favorite Story/Author/Alerts
| animesweetie 4/27/08 . chapter 2
Wow. Love it love it love it ]
Well-written, as always.
You know the characters so well, it's incredible. This is definitely a situation I can see happening in the manga. You put it into a much deeper perspective though. What you're writing is like...the time period from him coming back to them being together a few years later. But of course, the happily-ever-after thing doesn't come so easily and I think you are doing a really great job of telling their story ]
Even if it is a few scattered drabbles ]
| venus goddess 4/23/08 . chapter 2
i like this chappie more than the last one. And your sasuke mindset is getting better.
| Cataracta 4/23/08 . chapter 2
Absolutely love these. I loved your stories, I'm loving your drabbles, I hope you keep writing them!
| An Antidote 4/22/08 . chapter 2
Really? Someone is really interested and eager. Ohmy gosh, I would have loved seeing Sakura breaking Sasuke's ribs with a smile on her face. I imagined it of course but I just want it to happen. Gosh, sexual tension is in the air. Lol.
| keigojin 4/22/08 . chapter 2
So very insightful, it's refreshing havinga peak inside Sasukes head. Or a potential peak, his behaviours and thought processes along with his guarded emotions. I loved it. Write another please _ You write them so well