This was wonderful. I love how you portrayed Sakura and especially Sasuke. Its also nice to see that the style used to write this is different from RK (: Look forward to more!

Wow. I really like your take on Sasuke and Sakura. It would be very interesting to see how you patch up their relationship, or make a new one ]

That's cute. As much as I don't like Naruto *sorry it's just the whole ninja thing makes me kinda twitchy* that was a cute little read. Still I'm supporting you in all of your endeavors...even though they may deter from my love of your Kenshin fics. Well I'm sure you will return...hopefully or those stories will just plague my mind forever.

I beg to differ. After having read your stories for years, you do angst quite well. And a non-angsty (or less angsty) Sasuke was a sight to behold. Wondering what other segments will look like

You're right. Sasuke does seem a bit AU but in a sense it's refreshing from his normal dark, dreary self. That's part of the reason why I stopped reading Sasuke/Sakura fics because I found them too depressing. Or maybe I'm like you and am allergic to angst, which is strange because I write in it...

But good job. It's good to see Sasuke's character determined about something else other than revenge. But you seemed to glaze over the whole 'Why is he so determined to get back and make things right' dealio (which is understandable if you're trying to avoid too much angst/ or you just haven’t gotten that far in the story.) But other than that, all was else was good. I like how Sakura is not falling all over herself for Sasuke.

I shall patiently wait for the next installment, if there shall be one.

Toodles

OOh you do a very awesome adult sasuke and sakura. I don't think Sasuke is OOC I thin in the future he could very well come to learn and accept more about himself and also accept other more obvious things. I LOVED IT. It's rare for someone to be able to do a good Sasuke and Sakura. Even rarer for someone to be able to pull off Sasuke/Sakura.

oh

i like it :)

update soon X

Damn.

Wow.

That was good, way good. However, all your fics are good. I just hope you update soon.

I loved the way you made Sasuke human and real. Some of the fics I have read or written, it is more like grown up Sasuke still blaming someone in Konoha for doing him bad and self pitying himself for what happened to his clan.

But, at a some point he has to forgive and forget since we all know or have heard that he is a smart boy-sorry man. I'm going to go off track. I loved the line where Sasuke told Sakura, "I am not a boy." Anyway, where was I? Yeah, so it is nice for a change, you know?

Besides, the other Sasuke was starting to get irritating. Gosh, I'm such a hypocrite. I do use that old news Sasuke.

The story-

I loved the way you made everything believable and how you also managed to keep the characters in their character. It was so intense from the beginning until Sasuke made her lighten up.

Sasuke taking control like that is very interesting, rather than the way around Sakura trying to convince him that she was interested in him. But, in the story there he was offering himself to her.

-Brenu

he's so good at getting what he wants but not saying or asking for what he actually wants. just getting her to agree. please have more soon.

ack! sorry about that ravyn. did something funky and kick me out. didn't finish my reveiw...so sasuke reminds me of a aoshi/kenshin hybrid gorgeous emo fighter. sorry i just can't help but compare them and the writing style. like how you write the gestures and actions of a situation i.e. dangerous hot male after kickass female lead(which i love). however, i do feel the naruto-ness in the writing and characters. know that i'm not trying to offend you, i'm criticizing bc i love your work. i love the subtle complexities and piognant scenes.

overall this drabble is good and i look forward to more. i want to read your take on the sas/saku pairing. great job, kenni

oy vey, what an infuriating bastard that sasuke.

hmm, there's some confusion with the position on how the characters where standing. first it seems sasuke was standing behind sakura, then it seems she turned around to face him when she tilted her chin to look at his jaw. but later it reads she turned around to face him when she challenge him that he was hiding. the inconsistency threw me off and was distracting to the heavy dialouge; therefore it deterred me to fully gasps the cryptic meaning and reasons in the conversation. i had to go back and reread it.

um, your allergic to angst? hmm, i did feel some angst vibe here but it was a good amount. okay this maybe off topic but since i've read your rk fic first i keep comparing them to the naruto fics in terms of writing styles and character development. sasuke reminds me of some mixed version of aoshi/kenshin; the cold, monosyllabic, gorgeous genuis fighter

oh dark,interesting, very good! looking forward tothe update!

That was yet again a good story line. But I want to read the endings of your other stories, which are some of my favorite stories I have ever read on fanfiction, and I have read a lot. Blue Side of the Moon, Amber Linings, and Little One are those favorite stories of mine, and I really wish that you would update those. Please. This is a good story too, but not as good as those other ones (I am kind of bias to Kenshin and Kaoru stories anyway).

Tenshi: (thumbs up) GREAT FIC! As USUAL! (proceeds to hack up a lung)

Fuji: Sorry she's sick, or is it allergies Tenshi?

Tenshi: I think I'm sick. I have a fever, runny/stuffed nose, fatigued, bad cough, and-

Fuji: (sweatdrops) I think she understands.

Tenshi: (shrugs) Well my mom thinks it's allergies. But then again, when I had a fever of 103.9 she said that I would be fine without going to a hospital. (cries) Sometimes I think money's more important than I am...

Fuji: Sorry for her self-absorbed rant of her pathetic family.

Tenshi: Right, back to review! Anyways this seems like a good fic (oneshot?) so UPDATE SOON/KEEP ON WRITING YOUR TOTALLY KICK ASS STORIES!

Very intense. I like it.