So well written! I could imagine everything and feel everything! Great job!

So so sad. :( But really well written, of course.

"Sweeney’s stomach let forth one of the loudest growls that either of them had ever heard."

:) Sometimes when I'm at someone else's home, I don't want to be rude and complain about my hunger too much. But sometimes I'm too polite about it and my stomach will growl SO long and loud, and it's quite embarrassing. lol

Everything Mrs. Lovett does in this is exactly what I'd do. :) Sorry, had to say that. Anyways, I love this! I have no idea how many times I've pictured him sleeping and you described it wonderfully!

love! they're both so stubborn and determined, it's so funny. I love the relationship between them here, and how he sees hunger as a weakness...they definitely have a "butting-heads" sort of thing going. love it ^^

Poor Sweeney...and Toby...and Mrs. Lovett! They all had to feel uncomfortable!

I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT, EITHER!
That was hilarious!
"hitting Sweeney in a very undesirable place with a rather unpleasant thwack."
It's three in the morning and I can't laugh too loud, or I'll wake everyone up. But you're making it REALLY difficult!
lol

I laughed INSANELY at this chapter!
“Ba-kaawk!”
The moment I saw that I nearly died of laughter!
That was AWESOME!

Remarkable.

Aw poor Sweeney, giving himself a headache. love him forever!

That is so depressing! OMG I almost burst into tears! Toby!

Wow...confusing, metaphor-filled, play-on-words Sweenett? This isn't a parody! But it is awesome, so I'll forgive you both for the non-parodiness and the Sweenett.
-Molly/Falling Stardust

Oh my goodness, that last chapter completely choked me up. I loved Toby, *tears.* This chapter got me happy again though... He loves her! Oh. Keep on goping with this. Oh,and... House rocks! Lat week, I hurt my knee cap and ankle, and had to spend the week on crutches, then a cane. All of my friends called me House, ha.

That was a bit rambling, but it was kinda cute. ♥

I love it, another great chappie! you know... this chapter reminds me of the song "i hate everything about you" by 3 days grace XD
"i, hate, everything about you,
why do i love you?"

... well it matches slightly at least.. whoowell, long story short:
YAY XD