... ;-; If you're not going to repost all of it, could you at least send me what you'd finished before? This was one of those fanfics that I just absolutely NEVER forgot about and I nearly CRIED when it went missing the first time. T_T But I'd be just ELATED if you'd actually finish it, to be perfectly honest...

Other than a few grammatical errors, the story is really good, and has potential. Please continue.

These chapters were really good and the story has so much protential. I haven't found many stories that I like on fanfiction, and so far this syory and Childs_Play are my favorite. The only thing is that you should check your spelling, you misspelled a lot of things. I actually sometimes make up my own stories (I keep them to myself because I always forget where I put the paper when I wrote it down) based on what I watch on and latly, what I have been reading on fanfiction. So will you please contue writing White Clouds Of Akatsuki...

P.S. Many of my friends enjoy this story as well.

plzz plzz plzz preety plzz continue that story plzz plzz if u do ill give u a cookie if u do i fricking love this story plzz plzz plzz continue if u dont ill gt my friend evill elmo no to u jk jk i probably wont its relly hard to get throw to him but still will u plzz contine

did u redo the story

ann here.. nice chapter.. but.. im left hanging.. *sigh* please do update.. its incredibly nice.. though, i still like the previous 'un.rewritten' fic.. i wanna hear more from you.. pls update.

whew.. this is incredible.. i know there's still chapter 2 but i feel like givin this chappie a review.. and so.. im happy theres still another chapter after this one.. but.. ahm.. PLease.. pls do an update for CHAPTER 3.. i'd surely wait for that one.

its cul! ^^

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!oh and who are some of the other members?

Lol :P I'm still interested. I remember reading the other version... somewhat. o.o That seems like a long time ago. ^^ I do hope you will continue writing this fic.

o.o I'm a bit mixed up with the names. Or maybe I just need to re-read the chapter...

You had bettered write more soon! I love this story! It is brilliant. So, there will be itasaku, RIGHT? I want some of that, since those are some of the best stories. I was curious, though, about the lack of " " s. Is it the program you're using? And why does Itachi want her?

-jazz, in confusion

I'm so happy to see this story again! I loved the first version of it, and I'm really excited with this revision. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.

This was well done, but the in place of the "" was a little confusing.

Good luck with the rest of this!

-Hikari Adams