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| Kin Pandun 2008-07-25 ch 6,  | abuseMuch fun. The daughter thing is your call, I don't care much either way. I can hardly wait to read what's next. Thanks for writing, Kin. PS- What's happening with schooling for Harry? Is it just summer or something? |
| deathstick 2008-07-25 ch 6, | abuseI love it! So funny! |
| tolazytologin 2008-07-25 ch 6, anon. | abuseI would suggest waiting until the fourth season to add in 'OC's'. Giving Wilson a child will probably have a few people ** with you. Introduce to patients who are young (pick out a few of the younger ones that have appeared) then in season 4 you can introduce Cole's kid? Imagine the religious conflict :) Just don't cop-out and create an OC, especially Wilson's kid, a niece for a few chapters? Sure, but don't warp the show too much. |
| Embla Idun 2008-07-25 ch 6, | abuseKeep going, this is interesting. |
| Brad 2008-07-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis could actually end up being a good crossover. I like it. House would be the worst influence ever. I have to critique though, House would not have taken in Harry out of pure pity, there had to be something about him that interested him maybe not medically but something. I would have had Harry have a random illness like in the beginning of an episode to start this story, not just abused. You should make your chapters longer even if it means not as many updates. Hopefully you have a skilled beta reader cause I noticed a few mistakes but nothing big. I hope you continue to update this. |
| Dream's Abyss 2008-07-24 ch 4, | abuseI'm interested, but you need to work on punctuation. You don't really have much of any. |
| Fae Child19 2008-07-23 ch 6, | abuseI find this vastly amusing. I wonder what Dumbledore will think of a Harry with House life lessons. |
| Lady-rei1 2008-07-23 ch 4, | abusethis story is really funny. I can't wait to see what hogwarts thinks of him.:) |
| KakuSnake 2008-07-20 ch 6, | abuseomg that was so funny! you have to keep going can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| Sabergirl101 2008-07-19 ch 6, | abuseExcellent! Update son, if you are planning too. |
| Saturnblue 2008-07-18 ch 6, | abuseIt's pretty funny. It will drive Hogwarts resident over the edge with a new House reborn because of Dr. House. Kukuku, |
| lostwriterforlife 2008-07-17 ch 6, | abuseContinue or I keel you with the cane! |
| vincent1875 2008-07-17 ch 6, | abuseWilson with a daughter? I vote nay to that. A daughter would attach him to a wife so much that he wouldn't cheat on her so he would still be married, and Wilson is experienced with House enough to recognise manipulation and I doubt he'll take kindly to such a thing. I would recommend a slightly older, kinda stupid, Ron-like character for this role. Perhaps a bully that Harry outsmarts at a park or something for a meeting. Good story so far. |
| Isebas 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseMUST HAVE MORE! Seriously dude there aren't enough HP/House crossovers out there. I have been waiting and waiting for an update. This story is just getting started and getting better quality wise. Please Please update! Later, Isebas |
| SiriusBlackIsGod 2008-07-16 ch 6, | abuseHee hee, this is funny. You mentioned its a crossover, with what? I don't think I know the T.V. programme so if you could provide a brief background for us ignorant peeps that would be great. Update soon please. |