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eagle-eye89
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuseabsolutely love it:)
the best hiphugger story i've read so far:D:)
honestly, my favourite:)
Amanda Ruth
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseOkay, here's the review to make up for my idiocy when I didn't critique.

This was such an adorable story. Joe was so well presented, and he definitely created carefully. The way he talks is believable, and I even remember talking like that myself as a child (no joke).

I think the ending was my favorite part of this whole piece though. You avoided the clichéd kiss so well, having her just tell him he can spend the night in the same bed as her. It was actually kinda hot! I enjoyed it more than most kisses, just because of the way it was presented. it made so much more sense than the first kiss thing. It sort of reminds me of the end of All In... the feeling that I got when she simply agreed to let Eric drive her home. It's almost the same thing, actually.

Anyway, truly enjoyed this story. You did a great job with Joe, and you have a real knack at creating original characters!

Amanda Ruth ^_^
fire dragonheart
2008-04-25
ch 1,
abuseNice
DansieLynn Hokanson
2008-04-14
ch 1,
abusedamn! this is the best!

i was a little confused for a second, eric doesn't have a kid on the show does he?

anyway, i love this story!
lovincsimiami
2008-04-12
ch 1,
abusetoo cute! i loved it
bookworm45
2008-04-11
ch 1,
abuseThat was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I loved it. So very sweet. I love little Joe, with his Cawwie, and his sad little desire for a mommy. Eric's longing for a sign. Calleigh's fulfillment of both those desires. Cuddles. All so perfect. Great job!
Nora_73
2008-04-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseBeautiful!
xxNora
Hanneli
2008-04-08
ch 1,
abuseOn a scale of 1 to 10, my squealing's at about 32 right now. That was so, so adorably cute and cutely adorable.
Isabell89
2008-04-08
ch 1,
abuseI've become a bit obsessed with Eric and Calleigh over the past couple of days (watched the rest of season 5 and all of season 6 so far online because I had read some snippets here and there about what was happening between them and just couldn't wait anymore), so I decided to read some fanfics to get some real C/E fluff now that there is nothing left to watch. I'm glad I started with your fic, even though this story is AU and does not continue with the current storyline, it portrays them as so close and intimate it was exactly what I was craving right now. I put on my 'aww I can't believe how cute this is' face near the end and just couldn't get rid of it anymore. A wonderful piece of writing.
Tennischica
2008-04-08
ch 1,
abuseThis story is really cute you should write anothr one talking about eric joe and calleigh as a family that would be cute
shopping-luva91
2008-04-08
ch 1,
abuseOMG I LOVE THIS STORY! It's so adorable and heart-warming! I've had the worst day and that just cheered me up completely! Do you want me to beta it for you? The offer's still open from the first time I said it but there's honestly not that many mistakes. Let me know. Great work! xoxo
ducaine-girl
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abuseThat was really cute. I really enjoyed it.
preston-gal
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abuseaww I love it so much. I hope you consider a sequel because it is just the cutest especially the interaction between calleigh, joe and eric.

xx
Le Pecore Nere
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abuseWow, I love the interaction with the characters, and Joe, he's so cute =^_^= lol I love the way Cal fits right into everything, and the way they ALL fit into everything, like a puzzle waiting to fall into place. You did an awesome job orchastrating it XD I don't know how you do it, but everytime you write something, it always amazes me because it's both different from your other works, and beautiful. b^-^d Awesome job!
zelda49
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abuseThis is so...just, beautiful. I love the way you write Eric with Joe--it just melts my heart. And the way Calleigh fits in is so natural. I liked, too, that they noticed how normal things seemed that probably shouldn't have been normal at all. It added some realism to an already realistic setup. Great work!
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