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| allweknowisfalling 2008-04-24 ch 1,  | abuseLOVE IT!LOVE IT!! LOVE IT! once again, love it. |
| gold.star.speaker 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseOkay it's totally hilar that you pinpoint the switch to Manny as because of the boob-video. (Uh oh, just realized that when you hear the buses running outside you know you're up late...) I really like the line about Ellie taking off her shirt and not being afraid to show her scars, at least for a moment. Poetry!! I never liked Craig and Ellie together but I like the way you point to his fear of how much she knows...I buy it, very realistic. He so would ** her up more, though...he kind of did... |
| Lok2685 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI was really good. I think you got down the emotional complexities of Craig. You do a good job of describing hiss emotions. |
| wheredoesithurt 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. :) Best Crellie I've ever seen on here. |
| KashmirObsessed 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuse*clap clap clap* Very nice. Darkly humorous and romantic without the annoying fluff. I like it. |