Ooh, it's pretty. Boobies -gigglesnort-

I should've read this earlier >-<
Isso good. -squee-

I'm getting worse and worse at writing reviews xD

I loved it, honest. & I'll love it till the end x3

reimei xx

However on MY instance, my writing ability has been all but completely fizzled away due to her HORRIBLE HORRIBLE TEACHING. GAH! Well, I think reading AQOTWF has sparked my angsty writing-ness. It's very angsty and so very cut away at your feelings-esc.

But...pf...did you actually write those lyrics yourself? Because if so...

BUAHAHAHAHAHA!

'Tis extremely corny and funny, even if it is a real song.

Oh my gosh. Seriously, I have not reviewed anything that you wrote in forever--I think because it was all yaoi, but still. Wow, it's been a while. So, I am SUPER excited about this! Especially since I quit fanfiction period, and right now, you are the only person I will review! No, seriously. I really quit fanfiction... Boo. Well, I'm moving on to bigger and better things--such as finishing a novel and finding an agent. But anyways, this isn't about me! It's about you!

I like Kairi's last name! Does it mean anything in particular--I know that there was, or is, a Japanese Ambassador whose last name is Harada, but I don't know if it means anything. Anyway, it's pretty. I like it! Haha, and I love that she was actually counting how late they were. That's funny.

I like Riku's last name, too! Yay!

Bwah ha ha! He can talk! Oh, but I love him so much already. I love those mysterious types. Riku seriously makes me so happy. I love him right now. Yay! Again! Oh, yay, he isn't emo, either! I love him even more!

BIRDS! THAT IS SO CUTE AND ROMANTIC! I LOVE RIKU! Sorry. Enough of my fangirl-ness.

"And oh my God, they had a sale, Kairi. A sale. A beautiful, wondrous sale.”

Wow. Just... wow. That's all I have to say.

Aww, I'm upset that Kairi went and sat with Riku. I mean, it wouldn't have been that bad if it was just Kairi, but how could she bring all of her friends? That's just torturous--especially since I'm sure he wants to be alone. Poor guy. I'LL COMFORT HIM! Wait, he's a fictional character...

AWW! MEN WHO WRITE POETRY/SONGS! EVEN DEPRESSING ONES! Oh, I hate you for making me love him. He's too brilliant a character for words...

YAY! THAT WAS SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER! Okay, enough with the capitals. Anyways, that was so brilliant. I loved it. It's so great, and... well, it's just amazing. I love it!

Aww, high school is fun. I mean, yeah, it's hard, but it's fun. Trust me, freshman year is DEFINITELY harder than sophomore year. I promise you. You're just not used to high school yet, I guess. But you're English teacher is fine, I think, because your writing was amazing. Oh, and your friend is really great at writing songs! Tell Kris that he is awesome!

Yay! I'm so excited for more! I haven't read a fanfiction in months! Yay!

-Liz Hollow

Amazing as always, bb~

I am so like ~jealous~ of your writing! It's so good~ ;D (unlike mine D: )

Don't worry, it's totally awesome. You can do it! We can wait, as long as you need us to. X3

And I totally get what you mean with the English class sucking out the soul of writing. D: Mine's totally doing that too, because...essays comparing A Handmaid's Tale to the Scarlet Letter are a far cry from fic. XD

(Tokio Hotel's killing my writing too, as much as I hate to admit it though D: )

But I'm rambling. XD;;

I'll totally be looking forward to the next chapter, no matter how long I have to wait!

ilu bb~

-namikun

Hey! Your back, and writing again! Normally this would be the part were I say something witty, or something like that, but I'm on cold medication so I'm drawing a blank.

Hm...very intresting story you have here. Clearly AU, yet it doesn't fall into the "oh God, not another highschool story" cannon. The characters aren't OOC (at lest not that I noticed anyway), and everything was really well writen. *Adds to Fav's.*

PS: Don't worry, freshman year took me off guard to. But don't worry, you learn to cope with it after a while.

PSS: What was with the whole "Larry" and "Kaite" thing with the version of the story you put up this morrning?

PSS: I've started me rewrite of Door of Twiligh...

=] I don't really like the pairing, but the story was good enough for me to continue reading it. I really liked it!

holy crap, this is really good!silent and artsy,eh? i like...

continue please!

...*falls over* DANGIT, MY HEAD GOT SO BIG, I CAN'T HOLD IT UP ANYMORE~

Seriously. You're awesome.

*glomps all over this fanfiction* YES YES YES YES YEE-EE-EES! I LURVE IT SO!

*dies*

o...m...g... this is AMAZING! i wouldnt be surprized if u said GOD HIMSLF WROTE IT! O.O