Reviews for Could We Have Been

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macey000 2008-10-06 ch 8,	abuse(squeals) Yay! I go MIA for a few days and you updated, and what a chapter. It was great. Totally worth the wait. So many cookies to you. This fic is still one of the best and it isn't even finished yet (giggles). I loved the chapter (I think I already said that lol) but I didn't like the Aang/Katara kiss. Although I understand why you did it. Anywho, keep writing, your doing great. I won't ask for an update because I know you will throw one out as soon as possible (hehehe) ;P Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing Ciao macey0
MasterOfGrey 2008-10-05 ch 8,	abuseChapter 8 Review :-) LOL about the authors note at the end to start with, you do sound like a TV show :P But as to the actual chapter, great! I like how you got them out of jail :-) Few errors: - But Iroh said his density was to help the Avatar, but that the retired general’s destiny was. - When they're hiding together from combustion man you need to make sure you've got the right he's and she's in the right places cause it's a little confusing. Excellent though, can't wait till the next chapter.
Eternal-Hampsters-of-Doom 2008-10-04 ch 8,	abuseholy crap! You're one of the best writers I've ever seen! It's detailed and makes sense. Damn, I'm really liking this (also I loved the boy love too hahaha)
DarthAnimus 2008-10-04 ch 8,	abuseIf you sound like a tv show, it’s a damned good tv show. XD I think the chapter was great. It was a tad bit rushed at some parts but it didn’t affect the reading experience much; this was still enjoyable to read. Azula is such a lying little…rugnrugn. I can’t come up with a spot-on insult so that will have to do. I’ll be looking forward to the next instalment.
ElvenMagic 2008-10-03 ch 8,	abusegreat story! update soon!
UniqueIndividualism 2008-10-03 ch 8,	abuseThis one was really cool. hehe, glad you agree with me from the last chapter, I think Avatar would've been even more awesome if it turned out that way. Omg! Aang and Zuko finally get to see each other, but Aang doesn't have his memory! No! ...I liked how detailed everything was and how you expressed their emotions so well. Good job.
Jingy5 2008-10-02 ch 8,	abuseahh man you got me freaking out! as good as thins chpt was i cant help but wait impatiently for the next lol lol this one was good tho.. i like the fight scenes and esp that hunter assassin guy
Kyla45 2008-10-02 ch 8,	abuseI love you. Plain and simple. I'll be waiting for another update, too, with obsessive anticipation. You know how to write, girl. Nothing else matters, especially not something small like 'rushing' through the chapter. god. I love you!! Wondrous stuff, as always. I'll be waiting for more, but by all means, no rush, dear! Much love to your brilliant ass. :heart:
LovelyLittleAngel144 2008-10-02 ch 8,	abusethe story's still good. keep writing and update soon!
Silvermane1 2008-10-02 ch 8,	abusecool
Skye-Chan 12 2008-10-02 ch 8,	abuseAwe... I really don't want Zuko to meet Aang until he remembers... It makes me all angsty inside... Well, Queen Author, I await your next chapter and what ever it may bring.
Catra T. L. Heaveno 2008-10-02 ch 8,	abuseThank you for updating
YusukesLover 2008-10-02 ch 8,	abuseWAH! Aang's not going to remember being in love with Zuko! Please let it end up all right!
MasterOfGrey 2008-09-28 ch 7,	abuseChapter 7 Review Well I'll say this. That was one marathon read for sure. But it was excellent, the bit where Iroh tells Zuko about his heritage seems a bit rushed but otherwise I can find no fault anywhere in that enormously long and incredible chapter. Keep writing I'm dying to see the next one.
LovelyLittleAngel144 2008-09-27 ch 7,	abusethis is so sweet!! update soon!!

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