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Sugar0o
2009-06-23 . chapter 4
hn. its upsetting that your story has so few reviews. honestly you paint and weive a wonderful story that is masterful and beyond pretty in my minds eye. i see so much and yet i cant wait for more, i hope we see it soon. - r0o
my name is paper YAH
2009-06-22 . chapter 4
great for a short chap. hope you get some more inspiration soon!
anonymous
2009-06-22 . chapter 4
hope u update soon! reely like the fic!XD
Tsukiyomi No Miko
2009-06-21 . chapter 4
The story is getting so interesting, so many twists and turns. I am looking forward to your next update.

~Tsukiyomi No Miko~
Melanippos
2009-06-19 . chapter 3
Any chance the next chapter of this intriguing tale is in the works, on the cusp of fruition?
Silvara
2008-09-21 . chapter 3
That chapter had me smiling almost everywhere, and chuckling then and then.
Kagome is so endearing. Entertaining may be the word. Yes it is. :D
I can't wait to read more, but these two last chap (2 and 3) were very cool. There are passages that I can't tire of. I might read it over and over again.
My favorite ? Mhh, it's hard to choose, but maybe this :
"Inu Yasha had his moments too - the sun would catch in his eyes and the moonlight would strike his hair, turning it into a liquid silvery white that reminded her of--" Well... XD Sure Kagome !

Very well rounded. The beginning and the end feel smooth. Like an... essay.
It must sound corny, but heh, I don't find any other word to describe the contenting sentiment in reading the ending of this chapter.
Silvara
2008-09-19 . chapter 2
You did a great job on this. It was a pleasure to read.
I'm glad less and less fanficcers draw a petty and demanding Kagome now. That's so... *sigh*.

Oh, and I totally loved that sentence:
"And 'Heisei'?" he asked. "I was under the impression the current human reign was called 'Eiroku.'"

I'll shut up and just read more now. :)
my name is paper YAH
2008-04-16 . chapter 3
update. its a good story and i like it...so update already!!^.^
Jen Konoha
2008-04-07 . chapter 3
Wow, this story rocks! I hope you post more soon :)
JollyVenturer
2008-04-07 . chapter 2
o wait, you just submitted it ^^;
thats why
JollyVenturer
2008-04-07 . chapter 3
i cant believe this story doesnt have more reviews!! i found this on ebony_silks at first and i must say, i LOVED it :3.
You're writing is sublime, and i am honestly suprised you havent gotten more reviews! (i know im becoming repetitive, but thats how stunned i am!) i hope to see more from this story in the future
Sugar0o
2008-04-06 . chapter 3
very wonderful indeed.
Sugar0o
2008-04-06 . chapter 2
i was going to wait for chapter 3 to review but i'm stunned into amazement at the talent in your writing, i seriously hope the rest is as good or better, if so you may have found yourself a fan. this is absolutely amazing. - r0o
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