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Reviews For: Valley of the Wind

Fan Fan Girl
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseThis was a good drabble. I enjoyed it.

I don't know if Krumly would "truly hate her," but I think I see how you came to that conclusion... Perhaps because she has a chance to redeem herself... and also because, in a way, she was innocent of her crimes...

Well, anyways, you worked this angle of the relationship very well. Especially because I don't think that they even speak to each other in the game... good job rising to the challenge!
Ruingaraf
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abuseInteresting, I like the metaphor 'She-wolf', it fits Savyna somehow.
CrackedKatana
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abuseI love the love/hate aspect to this; it's kinda like how I see GeldoxFadroh post-Lava Caves...anyway, awesome job, and I can't wait to see what you do with that new pairing... XD
Legacy Now
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abuseSniff... that was beautiful... and cute... and adorable... Sniff...

About the loathing issue with both Krumy and Savy, yes... that was perfect! Sniff. (I will stop repeating myself now! haha!) Sniff...
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