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| Fan Fan Girl 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThis was a good drabble. I enjoyed it. I don't know if Krumly would "truly hate her," but I think I see how you came to that conclusion... Perhaps because she has a chance to redeem herself... and also because, in a way, she was innocent of her crimes... Well, anyways, you worked this angle of the relationship very well. Especially because I don't think that they even speak to each other in the game... good job rising to the challenge! |
| Ruingaraf 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, I like the metaphor 'She-wolf', it fits Savyna somehow. |
| CrackedKatana 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI love the love/hate aspect to this; it's kinda like how I see GeldoxFadroh post-Lava Caves...anyway, awesome job, and I can't wait to see what you do with that new pairing... XD |
| Legacy Now 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseSniff... that was beautiful... and cute... and adorable... Sniff... About the loathing issue with both Krumy and Savy, yes... that was perfect! Sniff. (I will stop repeating myself now! haha!) Sniff... |