what?! no way, jose! you HAVE to finish this story!! otherwise, i'll be mad, and... well, i'll be really mad! i don't understand how you say your stories suck. this one is really good, and i really wanted to find out what was gonna happen to the key! and (no offense to them) but you write way better than some people here. I'M UPSET! ):< finish this story!

Dear Music,

Don't hate your story! This one here isn't half bad!

The best part is the dialogue. You have the "teenage-boy-hormonal-dramatic" thing down well. The characters interact in a believeable way. The thing that could use some work is your grammar (sometimes its just an added letter), and the relationships. If you want to go into a yaoi direction here, that's perfectly fine, but the characters mention of the sexual relationships are too blatant, and they act somewhat feminine around each other. Now thats okay for Axel, and possibly for Sora, but not for Riku. Nor Roxas. Just keeps their personality traits in mind. And don't give up on this story! The possiblities for driving in a car are endless. Try and think up some ideas for car games, even do a chapter about driving through a mountainous national forest with beautiful sceneary. Then they swim in a lake or something. Just think of things boys do. Don't give up. You've got great potential.

~RBW

lucky for roxas ans sora! all they need to do is go PLEAZE? with their mom. my mom lets me go to parties but i have to leave early as a condition. BUT THE FUN STARTS AN NIGHT!no fair!

anyway, update soon
:D

ROAD TRIP!
I absolutly LOVE road trip fanfiction.
It makes it even better when it's KH road trip.
please update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
This story had me laughing every two seconds. Axel made me laugh histerically with: "Shelly" lmao.
-Sassy

aw... so cute! haha, this is gonna be a really funny story, i hope. anyways, i'm really happy you wrote the next chapter, so please keep it up!! :D

You should put a warning on this thing: Caution, Author is in no way responable for any injuries caused by this fanfiction...

Reason for that warning...I nearly gave myself an astham attack from laughing soo hard!

I laughed really hard at this. It was very funny.

well this should be... interesting to say the least. Poor Riku, he has hair problems it's so sad.

hehehe.. wuts gonna happen with the water guns? this sounds like a really cool story, write the next chapter fast! and we're not hookers... D: haha, i love axel. :D

heheh...this is great! the roxas/sora scene is totally hilarious. and of course axel's as ridiculous as always. 'she'...lmao...

awesome idea. keep it up!

Haha, this story is cute. xD I love cute stories~ Please continue soon, kay?
xD~!

wet axel! yay!