Wonderfully written, with nice touches of Leroux and Webber. Very good characterization and emotion. Nice job!

Hooray! A story where Erik's abusive tendencies come out! And the SARCASM...makes me dizzy, it's just so BITING! Great work!

I'll give you your reason Christine. You didn't want Red Death there to come and blow up you and your boyfriend. And because the news of your engagement would have caused mass panic and hysteria among the Frenchmen who think that status is the law.

Mm... how I love it when Erik drips in cruel sarcasm... Very in character for the both of them. Bravo! I look forward to more from you. )

warm regards,

dark-hearted rose

Yay! I'm happy that you posted this tonight. :D

I love Erik's snarkiness in this, especially when he's mocking Christine about the six months and when he's teasing her with the ring. I do love a sarcastic Erik. ;)

Write more! :D