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| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-07-24 ch 28,  | abuseJeez Sam LISTEN TO OLIVER! Gosh. This manifestation thing could be, and probably will be BAD. In fact, there are many bad things to come, I can tell. I'm hoping for some form of happy ending, I'm not sure what you're planning at all. It's really unpredictable, which makes it fun to read. |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-07-24 ch 27, | abuseWhoa, I totally didn't expect it to be Oliver! Looking back, there are a few hints. Nice twist, it was funny that they were just trasing each other and stuff while Kreuger and Co were still there. Haha. |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-07-24 ch 26, | abuseHm, I really do wonder who her brother is. But HOLY COW! This was an incredibly intense chapter, battle-wise and Seddie-wise. Wow. Seriously, I'm amazed. |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-07-24 ch 25, | abuseI'm just happy this isn't a brand new update, or I'd have to shout...EVIL CLIFFHANGER! Very brave of Fredward to take on all of them. I like that Sam went out to help him. |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-07-24 ch 24, | abuseI knew it! I KNEW Jake was dracula because of what Henry said! Sam was smart not to kiss him. And Freddie knew it was Dracula. Phew times two. |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-07-24 ch 23, | abuseUm, I'm kind of creeped out by that last thought. Not so sure what it meant. But oh no! The necklace broke! AH! Funny how Oliver sense of humor remains. He rocks. So do you for writing this! |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-07-24 ch 22, | abuseWOO! Go Freddie and Oliver! That was awesome, how they practically made Kreuger tremble. Really great chapter! By the way, wow, I can't believe you're actually replying to ALL my reviews, heh. |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-07-24 ch 21, | abuseYeah, I'm pretty curious about Oliver's mom, and what Freddie's reading. Also, wouldn't Sam be more...upset about Sam's death? I mean, he was sort of like a brother to him. And wasn't Jackson Oliver's friend? Anyway, still, great story so far |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-07-24 ch 20, | abuseYikes. The Sam vampire is so evil. It's quite scary. How did you think up all of this?! It's so intricate! |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-07-24 ch 19, | abuseInteresting. Very interesting. So vampire's are Kreuger's weak point, apparently. At least for now. |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-07-24 ch 18, | abuseOh god. This can't be very good. So Dereke's half vampire. Interesting twist. |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-07-24 ch 17, | abuseOh crap! NO! I was wondering when your OC, Emma, would come up. Freddie fell into her trap. Yikes. =/ |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-07-24 ch 16, | abuseOh, so this is the instance you'd mentioned would happen. That's really scary, but I figured it out as soon as he called her Samantha. The REAL Freddie knows he'd get his butt kicked for calling her that. What did Sam mean, by "she silently cursed her mother for doing what she did when she was six,"? Hmm. |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-07-24 ch 15, | abuseAw! What a sweet Loliver moment. I loved it. "You okay, skater girl?" was my favorite line. Great chapter! |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-07-24 ch 14, | abuseOkay. I know who the RP wizard is (Freddie's dad), because of his name. I've read way too many Nature90 stories, lol. However, I did not expect the BP to be Oliver's father (at least, that's my guess, because his last name starts with an O). So kudos for that, that was really cool. Kinda like fate, that they'd all end up at that camp. |