This is written well but Edward belongs with Kim. So no just no. sorry if I sound like a meanie head I'm just a simple nerd:)

Aww, she already has a crush on Edward how sweet.

I just watched this movie a few hours ago, lol.
I could watch it again and again for hours.
I love the story,

please keep writing.

awesome beginning. I love how u began it.

Please update soon.}

Very good. I love Edward Scissorhands. I have the movie. Anyways, very good story...please write some more.