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| lilyoftheval5 2008-05-13 ch 11,  | abuseWell, what I'd really like in the sequel (and I'm all for it) are the reactions of other people too. Their grandparents, people on the station, Minbari; something about them being half-Minbari and telepaths... |
| MoriahR 2008-05-12 ch 11, | abuseI just recently stumbled into this site and found your story. I have been checking often for updates. The characters felt real, true to the behaviors we know, and yet discovering more about themselves as the story progressed. I love the way you incorporated an AU into the timeline. You did such a wonderful job and I have enjoyed it so much that I'm sorry to see it end. Please do go on with a sequel. |
| CroatoanRoanoak 2008-05-10 ch 11, | abuseAfter reading all the chapters, I definately hope you comtinue with this. Interesting concept. These 11 ch. seem more of an introduction to the universe you've created than the end of the story. Looking forward to more. |
| lilyoftheval5 2008-05-04 ch 8, | abuseCharacterizations are amazing. I feel you're spot on when it comes to their reactions to the children. I hope Sheridan's thoughts are the next. |
| lilyoftheval5 2008-04-16 ch 4, | abuseInteresting... |
| DD Agent 2008-04-14 ch 4, | abusePlease update soon! I really want to read what happens next! |
| CroatoanRoanoak 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseWow...nice start...intriging storyline...please continue. |