Wonderful story! I also loved "And Yet He Flinched," although with your ending, hopefully that wouldn't happen, eh? I di think you've come to a great end... a sequel, perhaps?

Really brilliant story. i heartz it O_O :D It's really great, i think his fathers name is Tobias (not sure is that's how you spel it but i'm sure thats the guys name) hope you update soon and looking forward to reading more.

poor severus(

Disturbing and incredibly emotive- one really feels for poor Sev!

POR sev!oh my god!who would treat their child like that?plz continue!i'm so glad sev stood up to him!

I LOVE IT!-adrita

This is wondorful. The best story I've ever read. I can't believe how well you capture the character's feelings the way you do.

I can hardly see the keyboard I am crying too hard and my mom thinks I'm a depressed teen now. What I love about your writing in this story is how you became the character. I could feel the pain from your writing and that is so amazing. This is wondorful ending, but you should do a little ending chapter as Snape looks over his first class and sees a kid cowering or something. like McGonagal. Like, he inwardly feels sorry but won't show it because he's not weak.

OK, this is my longest reveiw ever! Wondorful story and SO well written. JKR better back off!

Wow, that was good. Wow... poor severus. just Wow

Oh my Godz, this is amazing! It had me crying! I feel incredibly bad for Severus, but in chapter four he is so brave! I HATE Sev's father! And the sad thing is that kids really are abused like that. I have to go hug my parents now.

enjoyed the fic.

I LOVE IT... can you PLEASE continue? *falls on knees and begs* I think it's a good ending though, but I just don't want it to end... ]

Cool way to end it... poor misunderstood bastard.

Oh yeah! _ *does the little dance* Go Sev. Go Sev. Oh yeah! Who da' man? You da' man!
That poor boy! He so needed help. The best part is that he triggered the trap himself. Good for a Slytherin. That self-reliant attitude is perfect for Severus's nature and the help from the teachers definately nails the nurture part. In my humble opnion, the tapes would prpbably have been enough to nail the father, but I like how Sev did this better. _
Now we need to find out what happens next. How does his mother and brother repay him? Does he get sent to a foster family? Does *gasp* Dumbledore or Potter take care of him? How does the Slytherin House treat him? *voice falls into the cheese television announcer TV set from Reboot* Does Sev ever get the hang of Transfiguration? Does his knack for potions come out when he heals? Does he ever gain back that weight? Next! Film at 11!*snaps out of it* Er... right. Anywho. Love your work as always, de Severa. Keep it up! Please! Finish this! I wanna know what happens. Just for me? Please? Scribo Celeritis? Onegai! m(_ _)m

YES YES YES! THEY GOT HIM THEY GOT HIM!*dances in joy Poor Sev... girly, I know we all love to turcher the heck out of him, but that was a little violient*shudder Ouch, Please cont.
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