| Reviews for A Little Holiday |
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T 4/7/08 . chapter 1 Oh, this is lovely, thank you! |
yourmirroroferised 4/7/08 . chapter 1One problem that i have reading your intricate and infinately well-planned and developed novels is the amount of details you throw into each chapter. Many seem so trivial. Your dialogue mostly. I find myself skimming. This could be merely the fault of my American attention span. where can i get the full version? |
dmf1984 4/7/08 . chapter 1*snerk* You are so sweet sharing the lemon-lite version. Gotta agree with Hogwarts Duo though ;-) It's still fun though! |
Hogwarts Duo 4/7/08 . chapter 1Wow! I'll say this story was purged for lemony content. It's almost like reading a new story, though with some similarities to your other story. tee hee. I still love the idea of Albus carrying Minerva over the threshold...aw. And of course, who wouldn't love to test the claw-footed tub with our darling Albus. Dreamy sigh. Glad you decided to post this to so everyone here could enjoy the story. While I'm enjoying this version, I have to say that my favorite version is the lemony one. tee hee. TTFN, GLM |