Me again... sorry to bug you, I'm just here to compliment your creativity by stating that I LOVE the way you portray Thursday as a person of sorts - it's amusing and interesting. I also like the idea Ike had... and now I'm going to part 7 (chapter 8).

I love this story! It's written really well, and the way the characters are portrayed makes them really realistic. I especially like the way you manage to incorporate things from the game, such as 'I fight for my friends'. I'd write more, but I'm too eager to read the next part!

AWW!! marth is so cute!! And so is Ike!! THey are being so cute! You kno i was just searching through the search and i like MarthxIke and i didnt kno this was but i wanted to look anyway and ifound that I LOVE IT!! ike is like a big bear! KAWAII!! Update soon!! I look forward to the next chapter!!

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I love this story! Will you please update?
It's so cute! I wanna know how it ends..

Before I got this account, I've been secretly watching you. o.o Now I review and really hope you update soon. I'll wait patiently but your fic is too good!

You really have gorgeous writing.

This is great. :) It's so hard to find good MarthIke fiction ANYWHERE, even if you try Google. Of course, there's the doujinshi...but I can't read Japanese.

I love all of your ideas! I hope you can keep updating this..It's been three months. D:

Although I have to say that I am waiting a long time for updates- They used to be quite frequent(maybe School is keeping you?) So yes. If you can, please try to work on it!

~MercuryLion

Adorable! This is so cute, I absolutely love this. Thank you for the read, its hard to find good fiction in this genre.

I await the next update!

The thursday ideas real cute. I enjoyed that

Wow, the moods changed so much. Intense to funny to harsh to terror to hilarious.

I laughed so hard at the ending. That was pure gold!

THAT WAS AMAZING, how you brought the taunts into it xD - I absolutley LOVED IT!!
Although, I wish Marth coulda swung a few punches, I bet Ike woulda been impressed :D

Wow, I'm impressed at how you switched from Girl speech to Royal, Big word speech xD

DUDE!
I thought I would cringe, but that was OK. It really did seem like Marth was just a damsel in distress xD

It was cool that you brought Peach into here :D

OMG - that was awesome xD - For such a silly topic, it was written superbly well!

This fic was recommended to me by 2 of my friends. They were toally obsessed with it, and I was moved by their passion, so I decided to try it now, even tho I was hesitant to Yao, but by the first line I was bought. It was impressive. I could see and visualize it, and Marth's mind (complex with his Hierarchy thing) was really, very interesting. I like the POV.

Can't wait to read more!

I'm just loving your fic right now! It was just so good I just click reading and reading until I ran out of chapters. I really like how you write Marth and Ike as normal teens (okay, not so much for Marth but you know what I mean xD); it just makes it more real and fun to read! Keep up the good work!