Reviews for Nature’s Finest Artwork

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Blood Riot Yagami 2008-07-01 ch 4,	abuseThis was fantastically written. I really enjoyed reading it, and all your other Grimmjow/Orihime fics. I've found that I'm a fan of this pairing. Keep up the great work. ^.^
essence007 2008-06-17 ch 3,	abuseYou've done an absolutely amazing job with this story! I read it when it was only one chapter, but now that it's four, I'm addicted. I especially like your choice of words. You seem to have a neverending dictionary going here. Lol. Grimmjow has always struck me as an intricate character, but NOW we get to see Ulquiorra. Very nice. Kudos to you!
twelveten 2008-05-21 ch 1,	abuse'breathtakingly gorgeous' ^,^
Jazzelie 2008-05-20 ch 4,	abuseI like it!! Its not too dirty..but not confusing! Good story!
Killer Intent 2008-05-13 ch 4,	abuseAbsolutely right. Orihime has all the right in the world to cling onto him. Heh heh. Did I review this one already? I don't think so. Funny accent, that guy has, does he speak sorta weird like that in the anime and manga? Sounds like some of the folks back home, haha. I loved how you sum things up at the end of the chapter with that little paragraph and the line afterwards. And I have to say, I was fooled by Grimmie too; you had me totally convinced that he was just going to leave and I could've sworn that the chapter was going to end there with him leaving her to keep his 'dignity' around the other Espadas, especially under the watchful eye of Aizen. When he came back, I couldn't help but laugh with joy, that punk better have come back! And he's such an actor, too! Dragging her like that, hurting her, when he really just wants her to wash herself. What a punk. Although I like your writing no matter what series you'll decide to cover, I'm still aching for another chapter of your Naruto/Ino stories. Fear of the Dark was my favorite, was that one completed yet? And, as a side note, although I'm sure someone is bound to get pissed off at me for not working on my own fanfiction, I'd like to offer my help if you ever want to write a crossover or compilation or some other word I can't think of. I still plan on doing a Bleach/Naruto crossover just because of Kenpachi, but who knows, I might think about adding Grimmjow too if I ever bring myself to read the manga far enough. Not to mention I'll have to read it if I ever want to see Kenpachi kick the crap out of someone again.
JMHO 2008-05-08 ch 4, anon.	abuseThe OOC Inoue at the end could be excused by the ordeal she just went through. I have only one thing to nitpick in this story. Inoue doesn't use polite speech with the Arrancar. She calls all of them by their first names. Just Grimmjow, not Grimmjow-kun. Just Ulquiorra, not Ulquiorra-kun. Making her use yobisute makes them look like they're friendly with each other even though they're not. The honorifics aren't suited for Inoue or the Arrancars. Inoue addressing Grimmjow by -kun is more OOC than her jumping him in the shower.
xadie 2008-05-06 ch 4,	abuseI hadn't really thought of Grimmjow/Orihime before, but you really make it work. I especially loved Grimmjow's perspective in the second chapter, you really captured his inner growl brilliantly. I'd love to read more of this.
ONIX-21 2008-05-06 ch 4,	abusehey this was really well written!! im not a fan of rape stories either especially wen their really graphic so i was hoping that if u actually did this so that she was raped that u wouldnt do it graphic but i was totally happy with the fact that she was saved though i kinda figured she would be hehe :D awesome really powerful writting love the rescue scene and the last scene in the shower i think it was sweet!! XD cant wait to see wats gonna appen next i always look forward to updates of this story so i hope u update soon XD XD
Killer Intent 2008-05-05 ch 3,	abuseInteresting chapter, hon'. I got to say that I'm liking this guy more and more as you progress with this story. And that's a sweet-ass name for a sword: Pantera. Damn. Or was I wrong? I know that his original form is sort of like a pather or something? And I'm surprised that bleach used so many names and other references in Spanish, with that big brown guy with the super-arm.. Sado/Chad? I can't remember, it's been so long and he wasn't too good during the 'hang what's-her-face' arc so his name never stuck. I just remember him calling his grandfather 'Abuelo' and I went to check to see if I got a Spanish dub of the anime. Haven't read the manga yet, do you prefer that or the anime? Ha, I'm also quite flattered that I made three appearances in your story. Wink. Glad that I was of some use in scaring the crap out of Orihime while those two we're fighting. I'm kidding, but most people don't use 'killer intent' in any stories, even in Naruto fics, and that surprised me, since I got the name when Orochimaru pulled the skin down on his eye to crush Sasuke and Sakura's nerve and put them into a state of paralysis through fear during the chuunin exams. That was a great moment and I thought back then, 'This fucker's evil..' Anyways, he ended up becoming some weird MJ freak and died and attached himself like worms in Kabuto's butt and mouth or something, so I'm guessing there's some molestation issues that he hasn't been able to shoulder and that's why he's all nutty now... er, anyways. I liked your fighting and it was great that you didn't have Grimm lay him out in the beginning, since that would sort of ruin it. In fact, he was getting ready to lose, but at the same time take him down with him. I didn't expect him to die there, since there's a fourth chapter and there's too much 'grimm/hime' love in you for you to do that, I think (Am I wrong?), but I think it's hilarious that she's saved him at least twice now, and just that bit of info is definitely worth mauling over for some future Orihime-dom moments. It doesn't necessarily mean that sort of domination, but that doesn't necessarily mean it can't be. I completely forgot about that blind guy; was he the one that broke the fight, Tousen? And by the way, I found no words or spelling issues that were bad enough to be brought to attention, or remembered for that matter, so I think you might be pretty clear, unless you've edited it a good while ago? I know I was slacking when it came to reviewing any of your stories, but I don't remember how long it was since you posted this chapter, so... anyways, I'm gonna read the last chapter and head to bed, so goodnight hon'.
Jace 2008-05-05 ch 4, anon.	abuseI wish author's would stop writing the way the characters talk. It's hard to read all the shortened words and it's not really necessary. Nnoitra and Grimmjow and Gin and whoever else don't speak like authors write them. Straight English is perfectly fine.
JJ Gestapo 2008-05-05 ch 4,	abuseAw...I was holding my breath at the part where Grimm turned his back on Orihime and shut the door behind him. Quite intense. I also loved the part where he gives her that vicious glare, oh it was just awesome! XD :D LOVE YOU AND WRITE MORE!
Lady Constantine 2008-05-05 ch 4,	abuseXD You almost raped Orihime (again)! Shame on you and by Nnoitra this time. Lord being raped by him would take some time to get used to. Him and his multiple arms... I hate rape fics too, but this chapter was good regardless of it's contents.
Lady Constantine 2008-05-05 ch 3,	abuse^.^ Sugoi~ This chapter help me alot. Today I found out two people I know died in a flaming car accident... Yeah, I was depressed about it and couldn't bring myself to cry in front of people, but now I don't think I have to anymore...
NigaleCross 2008-05-05 ch 4,	abuseOh... will Aizen's reasons for allowing the relationship come to light eventually? You kept Nnoitra in character pretty well. He's a coward and I don't understand Tesla's devotion to him.
Walis 2008-05-05 ch 4,	abuseHeh heh... Well, I don't know about being one of the luckiest girls around, but Orihime has definitely found her defender (two, really!) there in Hueco Mundo. I enjoyed this chapter and how it opens their relationship into something far more evident than it was before. Hope to see an update soon!

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