haha, too cute! ;) wonder what Matsuri was thinking the whole time, too. hehe.
I think Gaara said too much, cause I can't see him saying that many words at once, lol. but his thoughts were very in-character, bravo. :)

that's good that it was brought out into the open.

You do a really good job at conveying the emotions and syncing them with the actual characters. There's really not much else I can say. Keep up the good work, okay?

So, does he want Matsuri to ast like a fangirl now? XD

Hi Tiger

Great Story!

Don't worry I have also my share of problems

But let me tell you, you're improving

Congratulations!

cute!! I like it very very much. Keep the stories coming. Great job!

M, another lovely Gaara/Matsrui fic.
*gurbles at the cuteness*
I do hope you write more of these ideas you have.
:D I enjoy reading these stories of a pairing
that needs more love~!

Good story ^^

Nicely written and very sweet. I think one of my favorite things about GaaMatsu is their friendship. It makes the romance between them much more natural and fun to write. I think you did a good job with that here. Excellent work! ^^

I kept wondering while reading the story exactly when and how Matsuri's fangirl behavior started and just how bad it was, if it was bothering Gaara enough to make him avoid her. Nice story.

Nice Job, Tiger5913. Very wordy, like mine, but good. I especially liked that little allusion at the end. Watch out, though. You still use commas too often in your sentences. Try and separate the sentences a little more when it comes to the commas. Otherwise they will tend to drag on and occasionally form run-ons. I hope you continue this one! :)

Cheers!

(fourteenth guardian)
-T. A. Raskelt-

You really do have Gaara's characater done. All his thoughts and feelings there. Bravo. I love when people can really 'get into the characters mind'
Keep it up. :D

~ Spikey

Very nice! I like the way you express Gaara's thoughts and feelings - you're very skilled and imaginative in your approach (Baki appologizing? Didn't see that coming . . .). Your diction is very clear and direct.

I love your disclaimer, by the way. ^_^

great stuff as i expected from you. nice