Here's an interesting trivia fact for you: Jareth's magic is powerless against true love, i.e. Sarah's love for Toby. But it would be like the J man to find -some- loophole.
Personally, I don't think I would read anymore. I can already guess where it'll lead, how it would end, and some sub-plots. Ah, well. I'm sure your other reviewers will be more loyal to you than I could ever be.
You seem to have potiental as a writer, but only time can tell. Well, until the clock strikes twelve I guess.
Tootles.

That's kinda creepy, that she is in the future n all, but it's good!

That's kinda creepy, that she is in the future n all, but it's good!

I definitely think there should be another chapter or part. This is a cliffahnger, and an evil (in other words good) one at that! Keep writing this and anything else.

Wha? What is going on? Someone tell me? You must write more! A poor blonde's sanity is on the line!

Holy Cow! You must write more! like why this happened, it was too short to be finished! I love it though! please please please! write more)

ooooo cool! you've gotta write more!

thats soo sad...

please continue this, I want to know what Sarah is going to do.

*grins* Wow, I think I'm experiencing deja vu! *laughs* As I've said before...did I?... Great story Autumn days do amazing things to the creative process and the soul.

...cool. 90 kitty treats for you! Write more!

Interesting, but can I request a sequel, this sounds like too good of an idea just to stop there!