Oh, so pretty. Excellent proof of the benefits of simplicity. The dialogue was natural and atmospheric, and the relationship between the two is crystal clear. Congratulations!

As always, a brilliant job.

This was cute. I thought telling the story in a series of short sentence fragments was very clever. Often, writers try to do this and they end up botching it (even professional writers). I am quite impressed that you were able to pull it off so nicely. It actually gave the piece a very innocent tone. Great job!

Delightful! It perfectly displays the childish innocence of Meg and Christine's relationship. Very sweet, I'd love to see something longer written about them, but this was wonderful anyway.

Ciao bella,
Ali

For some reason, I LOVE this.

This is just as interesting as the other one...which I forgot to review...I'll get to it later tonight, I promise ^)^

I love how you manage to make their relationship stand out in a way that it usually doesn't, but still keep it the same as well.

I love it!

Another lovely little piece. It's nice to see how you bring out a touch of sensuality, while staying within the characters. You are making their friendship an interesting read.