Ooh, very creepy, and quite interesting.

That was... facinating. In fact, it was actually very good.

That was awsome. It was interesting and supprizing.

I don't usually like reading horror, but this still very well written. I'd like to see you update your fics. Good job!

That was beautiful. I did not understand the different breaks in the page, but it was still beautifully written. You should write more gastly stories of this type!