I really liked this story, it was delicious, especially the character of Miranda.

Yeah! Alec is dead! I am still not quite sure why Miry (miranda) hates Josef so much. Aubery is a good kid too bad she fell for Alec's little act. I am really glad that Mick and Miry are together now. All in all this was a great story and I thouroughly enjoyed it. I can't wait to read your sequil!

Alanna

:)

Sorry for not reviewing the last chapters.

I really like this fiction and I'm happy to know that there is a sequel. It's refreshing to read other pairing than Mick/Beth (even if I like them together).

I wish your story was longer.

Anyway, I'm going to read Zoe.

:-)

Wow that was a plot twist! I bet josef regrets turning his brother now... especially with aubery involved. I really like this chapter and I love that there is a promise of action for the next chapter. I am with Miranda I doubt that Josef will stay away long because he is just that way! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Alanna

So they have finally admitted that they love each other That's GREAT! Alex creeps me out. interesting little back story between Josef and Miranda but I like it. I really like this chapter I am gonna go read the next one now!

Laters

Alanna

Wow Alec doesn't waste any time does he? He sounds creepy I hate him already! he is a real jerk of a vampire. I hope they are able to save Aubrey. I really can't wait to see what happens next! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Good thing they didn't bring Beth I hope they never do ALec really freaks me out at leat from what Josef has said.

Alanna

I want more!

I'm curious about Josef, he seems really worried about Aubrey... could he know her?

Can't wait for the next update

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Dun dun DUN! the plot thickens! So Josef is aquainted with mister psycho vamp Alec this should be interesting. What does Josef mean when he says "you wear it well" ? Beth shouldn't get too down on her boyfriend he is after all only human! Oh SNAP! that pun was totally intended! *sniggers at her own joke* probably not that funny though. Any way I can't wait to see what happens next! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Alanna

Wow... Miranda becomes a bitch when she is upset! I kinda feel a little sorry for Beth but she really shouldn't go around poking in other peoples business. Then again she is a reporter. This development between Mick and Miranda is interesting but I feel sorry for Beth beacuase Mick doesn't seem to feel anything for her. I'm gonna move on to the next chapter now! Toodles!

Alanna

Ok so obviously, 3 reviews are not enough for a great fiction like yours!

I really like the idea of Miranda's character. Her relationship with Mick is so confused and Beth doesn't

Also, I'm curious about Aubrey and this Alec... I think this is more that a simple kidnapping and feeding from a vampire. This Alec seems evil...

Anyway, thanks and keep going

Wow what an action packed beginning! is this based on a movie? I really like it and I hope that Aubrey is okay. I think it was that other vamp Josef... I don't like him! I can't wait to see what happens next! Is Beth a human? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Kairi's Twin

Honestly, that started out kind of confusing, and I had to struggle to mentally catch up. I'm interested in Miranda as a character, and like your brisk style, but you might want to develop character insight and behind the scenes stuff a little more thoroughly. It can get a little murky at times.

:)