Aww this chapter was adorable! Please continue this, it's so good. Ttyl.

awesome story! i love it so far!

Very cute story, just recently found this movie again after years of looking for it
Sorry to hear about all of your woes, and hopefully it gets better for you soon.

I think that my favorite chapter in this story is chapter I thought that you were gonna make them kiss. I llove you're stories they are ausome and when you get a chance do you think that you could make up some more capters for this story please and thankyou

when are you ging to put up new chapters I wanna see Aly and Danny do it or at least kiss I got hooked on this story and I wanna find out more so could you please e-mail me at

I think you should go back and put a kissing scene in here right where Danny has Alyson in his lap would be perfert but its like after he was done singing she looked into his eyes and they kissed and said I love you to eachother and then make love on the table down there

OMJ I love the part where Alyson basicly throws herself at Danny and tells him not to leave I also Love Love Love the part where danny holds Alyson in his lap and she just sits there listning to his heart beat and then Danny singing. It's a turn on for me if a guy can sing and play guitar like Danny. I realy strongly think that you should finish this story. please pleas please

OMJ I thought that the best 2 parts in this one was when the bat flew at Aly and she ran into Danny's ches and he held her there asking if she was ok so cute. The second pard ws when they were sitting on the floor and she coulden't find Danny he pulled her into his lap that was realy cute too.

OMJ that was so cute the way thier fingers intertwined that was ausome. you serously need to write more Now You See It stories maby some with austual lemon in it like how bout this Danny and Aly are going to the secret room to do some more research and they end up having sex in there and Danny gets Aly pregnat and Max tries to take the baby away from them . That would be an ausome story

OMJ I thought that was so cute.I love the part where Alyson falls asleap on Danny. True genius and verry romantic you have to write more soon please,please,please(puppy dog eyes)

Oww,so cute the secret library scene!*0
Your story is soo cute..it's how the movie should have been...with all this AllysonxDanny parts!

I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter...update it soon,ok?*

AH! _ This is the best 'NYSI' story I've read yet! And I've read quite a few!
The last part, and whenever there's a Danny/Allyson moment, really! U
Rock on! Brilliant! I can't WAIT for the update! U *U
Ever-so sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D
P.S.- What's the song Danny and Allyson are singing?

i like it

what? No Make out? aww come give us one:D anyway I really do like this start it up again?

Hi

Sorry I haven't reviewed this chap. I LOVE IT. It's so sweet and you're right a kiss would've been to much at this point in the story. PLEASE UPDATE asap and I'm working on mine so it should be up later today hopefully. LOVED IT.

D-Queen