 Sparklillian 2009-08-12 . chapter 1a broken promise is sad, so update soon, I want to see how the story goes. |
 Wolf978 2009-08-12 . chapter 1 Please update. It's a really good story |
 yumi2482 2008-11-05 . chapter 1wow |
 Kiku-chan3322 2008-06-16 . chapter 1please update, i can tell this is going to get really good :D |
 tUrNtOfAcEtHiSwAy 2008-05-19 . chapter 1Hey!
This one was very very nice!
As far as I can see it is not labled as 'completed' ;)
Hopefully you are going to go on with this splendid idea! |
 .'.'.yUe-hEiKa.'.'. 2008-04-23 . chapter 1i think you really had a good start. keep going! hope you update soon! |
 DemonGirl13 2008-04-11 . chapter 1omg! totally love it! |
 takari love 2008-04-10 . chapter 1Hmm, interesting fic...^^,
I like fics like this where there's promises from the past or etc...lol
I can't wait for the next chapter...^^
Ja ne...^^ |
 -w-e-i-r-d-b 2008-04-08 . chapter 1I like your story. You are a fast writter, I'm very slow and easily distracted.
I hope you can update it soon and do it a little bit bigger.
Also the end of your chapter is like an spoiler of my story... upps I shouldn't say that XD
Anyway I like it so good luck with everything.
There are not a lot of stories with a Ryoma/Ryoga pairing. |
 Setsuna-X 2008-04-08 . chapter 1Firstly, interesting dialogue. Is it going to switch back to present day? I urge you to make this a Ryoma/Ryoga fic simply because there really isn't alot of those. And if it fits your plot, please leave Tezuka single. But regardless, this is interesting. I too am writing a fic where Ryoga is coming back, but im not posting it till later. I cant wait to see where your story goes. Also, there are some minor grammar issues in the wrting--it was kinda hard to figure out what was being said, but i muddled through it. Good luck with the new story. |
 animeangel088 2008-04-07 . chapter 1good fic. |