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| KikiPet 2008-07-24 ch 16,  | abuseWow, I am so diggin' it! Keep writing, please. Kiki |
| Person-san 2008-07-13 ch 16, | abuseThis has a very interesting plot, with a juicy twist! Please continue the good work. |
| samantha rivera 2008-07-06 ch 16, anon. | abusewait...wait come back its getting soo good... |
| Showty 2008-07-04 ch 16, | abuseI love it. Extremely interesting, and I like the Aria's reaction to Reid being an **, they will certainly be a difficult pairing. Its a bit difficult at times, but absolutely fantastic. |
| Geminidragon 2008-07-03 ch 16, | abuseLove it! I wish that there were more stories like this out there. I hope that Aria kicks Reid's ** ^^ and I hope that he likes it ^=^ |
| Arciere 2008-06-29 ch 16, | abuseI love Sept and Arkael. (btw, great name) They are very lovable characters, and Arkael is such a sensitive Carpathian. It's strange, since I'm so used to them being dominant and possessive. I'm not liking Reid though. I don't think that he is very likable at all. He's a dick to me, possessive in the wrong way. Now, the slash idea was an interesting take, and I enjoyed it, because I am very openminded. I would love to see Christine write some, but alas, I don't think that will ever happen. Your writing is pretty good, but I would look over some things, because there are a few typos and awkward places. There aren't too many, but enough that I would suggest revising. Please don't take this as a flame, I'm just trying to be honest and critical. I would expect the same in return. I would also love to read more of this story. You simply cannot leave me hanging like this. I encourage you to to post another chapter soon, please? -Arciere |
| shanikwaxx 2008-06-26 ch 16, | abusei love it |
| Goldsparkler 2008-06-26 ch 16, | abuseVery tastefully done! I loved it, and Aria and Reid well there's going to be fireworks I can tell. Have a good trip and I look forward to reading more when you get back. |
| smb186 2008-06-25 ch 16, anon. | abuseI love where this story is going, keep up the good work!! |
| nekdlove 2008-06-25 ch 16, | abuseI just stumbled across this story today and just wanted to say that I think it's great and really quite interesting. I'll be keeping my eyes open for more. |
| samantha rivera 2008-06-25 ch 15, anon. | abusewhy do u do this to us...plz...i liked this chapter it made me smile to think of the oddness of it all...have a safe trip |
| shanikwaxx 2008-06-22 ch 15, | abuseYES! the reviews are nessecary to help you keep going anyway i stiil love your story update soon xoxoxo shanikwa |
| Goldsparkler 2008-06-22 ch 15, | abuseYeah, I feel sorry for him but he needs a bit of lovin' before he goes off to fight his brother humm?? |
| iloveme5895 2008-06-21 ch 15, | abusesweet love it *~ashley~* |
| iloveme5895 2008-06-21 ch 14, | abusei love it so good! lol ive been wanting a gay couple in the series, but he never made one lol but yea really good love it *~ashley~* |