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KikiPet
2008-07-24
ch 16,
abuseWow, I am so diggin' it! Keep writing, please.

Kiki
Person-san
2008-07-13
ch 16,
abuseThis has a very interesting plot, with a juicy twist! Please continue the good work.
samantha rivera
2008-07-06
ch 16, anon.
abusewait...wait come back its getting soo good...
Showty
2008-07-04
ch 16,
abuseI love it. Extremely interesting, and I like the Aria's reaction to Reid being an **, they will certainly be a difficult pairing. Its a bit difficult at times, but absolutely fantastic.
Geminidragon
2008-07-03
ch 16,
abuseLove it! I wish that there were more stories like this out there. I hope that Aria kicks Reid's ** ^^ and I hope that he likes it ^=^
Arciere
2008-06-29
ch 16,
abuseI love Sept and Arkael. (btw, great name) They are very lovable characters, and Arkael is such a sensitive Carpathian. It's strange, since I'm so used to them being dominant and possessive. I'm not liking Reid though. I don't think that he is very likable at all. He's a dick to me, possessive in the wrong way.
Now, the slash idea was an interesting take, and I enjoyed it, because I am very openminded. I would love to see Christine write some, but alas, I don't think that will ever happen.
Your writing is pretty good, but I would look over some things, because there are a few typos and awkward places. There aren't too many, but enough that I would suggest revising. Please don't take this as a flame, I'm just trying to be honest and critical. I would expect the same in return.
I would also love to read more of this story. You simply cannot leave me hanging like this. I encourage you to to post another chapter soon, please?

-Arciere
shanikwaxx
2008-06-26
ch 16,
abusei love it
Goldsparkler
2008-06-26
ch 16,
abuseVery tastefully done! I loved it, and Aria and Reid well there's going to be fireworks I can tell.

Have a good trip and I look forward to reading more when you get back.
smb186
2008-06-25
ch 16, anon.
abuseI love where this story is going, keep up the good work!!
nekdlove
2008-06-25
ch 16,
abuseI just stumbled across this story today and just wanted to say that I think it's great and really quite interesting.

I'll be keeping my eyes open for more.
samantha rivera
2008-06-25
ch 15, anon.
abusewhy do u do this to us...plz...i liked this chapter it made me smile to think of the oddness of it all...have a safe trip
shanikwaxx
2008-06-22
ch 15,
abuseYES!
the reviews are nessecary
to help you keep going
anyway i stiil love your story
update soon
xoxoxo
shanikwa
Goldsparkler
2008-06-22
ch 15,
abuseYeah, I feel sorry for him but he needs a bit of lovin' before he goes off to fight his brother humm??
iloveme5895
2008-06-21
ch 15,
abusesweet love it
*~ashley~*
iloveme5895
2008-06-21
ch 14,
abusei love it so good! lol ive been wanting a gay couple in the series, but he never made one lol but yea really good love it
*~ashley~*
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