|Reviews for Crystal Nothings II: My Wings Angle Down|
| kinllover 4/20/12 . chapter 23
NOOOOOOOOOO it can't be over they need to be resurrected... ewww what link see in Ganondorf he's sooo... evil. Poor Pit :-( I was crying like crazy in my bed reading this it's so vivid in my memory it's just so sad, but so good... I swear this is the best fic I have EVER read I bow to ur awesomeness in fact this is as good as th's Harry Potter series it's that freakin epicly sad. :'(
| 1950'sTV-Family 9/8/09 . chapter 23
Wow... I didn't expect Wolf to be a pedophile... This is much better than the first one, and I'm glad that I scoped out your profile in a fit of boredom. Hopefully, you'll stick to making Wolf less of a kiddie fiddler, later. Overall, this story was grand (just to clarify, I'm saying that in an overly confusing Scottish accent)
| Hatsuya900 7/28/08 . chapter 9
Y Y Y! ZELDA AND SAMUS BOTH GONE! GAH! THER MY BEST CHARACTERS! great story, but I nvr imagined so many of tha smash characters to b gay. different perspective. nice touch addin Gandrayda as tha new samus tho, i wuda nvr thot of tht.
| Felicity de Carlo 7/18/08 . chapter 23
Yay for gay! Great story, dude!
| Basil-Ovelby 7/7/08 . chapter 23
Congratulations on finishing such a wonderful fic! I commend thee for sticking with it until the end (wow, I wish I could do the same thing, ahaha)
But wow, I loved this thing pretty much the entire way through. One thing that I especially enjoyed was how changing it was. There was constantly something else going on, things changing around, twists and surprises... in every chapter, it seemed, there was always at least one thing that made me just 'oh!' Definitely kept things interesting and kept your readers on the edge of their seats.
Your characters were so much fun to read as well. I loved their personalities and how they meshed with your writing style. Plus, they didn't remain static through the whole story. They grew and developed along with it, so you can definitely see a difference between them from the start to the end of the fic.
The last chapters were great wrappers-up. I loved how you brought Samus and Zelda back as you did, also incorporating a little humor, while still reminding us of the seriousness of most of the situations. Some of the characters' endings brought them back to the same position they were in at the end of your last fic, but yet they were also different in a way in that they had matured somewhat. And then, while I'm still sorry for Ganondorf in all that he went through, I can't lie in that I'm quite happy that Link is going to give Pit another chance, even though he still doesn't remember everything. After all that he went through, Pit definitely deserves that.
So yes, wonderful. Quite wonderful. This has been one hell of a fun read, and I've thoroughly enjoyed following it through to the end. Keep up the awesome work in the future!
| blankcanvas01 6/30/08 . chapter 23
Great ending and resolution. Everything ends out well, for the most part. This is possibly the greatest SSB fanfic of all time. Call it weird, but the ending, to me, mixes A Scanner Darkly, Waking Life, and Clerks II. All with semi-happy endings, leaving a bit of question behind, though.
| HappyGaylord 6/30/08 . chapter 23
Yaay! Happy ending! Finally Link and Pit are together! (Well not completly but almost)
With this ending, there's no need for a part 3! : D
The Mario part really made me laugh, I feel so sad for Luigi. XD
Though, it didn't beat the Captain Falcon part! I though he was a "I'm super straight" kind of guy! XD
Great story! I was always hoping for an update every day! : D
I'll be looking forward to your next fic!
| Tylida Doradelo 6/30/08 . chapter 23
I knew you'd make it all better! *hugs like crazy* Thank you! This was such a great story. I can't believe it's over!
And fine, I won't ask for a 3rd. *pouts*
But I can't wait for you next story!
Thanks again for an awesome story! XD
| Wind Kaizer 6/30/08 . chapter 23
Dang. You knew I was going to ask for a part three didn't you? Ah well, it was a great ending, even if it did have a few errors (you spelled turmoil wrong, and you forgot to put Link's name in the sentence when he said he was going to see Pit). But it was very good though, and I'm sad that the story is ending. Can't wait to see what you are going to do next!
The one & only,
| Kitetheblade 6/30/08 . chapter 23
:O OMG! NO 3RD! \/ . \/ ok then...
BUT OMG THIS WAS SUCH A GREAT STORY I would DO ANYTHING TO READ ANOTHER ONE OF THEM! Oh and thanks for the shout out thats my first one
| HappyGaylord 6/29/08 . chapter 21
Fox and Falco had a nice ending! : D
I'm pretty sure Wolf loved that part too. Xp
But I was really surprised that they would actually do it with Wolf, though I don't think Wolf minds...
I'm really glad that Wolf didn't go all Pedo on Toony... Everything Wolf said was true, and it's good that Toony understands that. : o
Tha ending of the chapter was so cute! : D
Will you write about what happens to the other smashers or is this the ending?
| Basil-Ovelby 6/25/08 . chapter 21
This chapter makes me... crap, it makes me so... SO happy. I barely even have words. First off, the writing just... I loved it. What you did with Toony and Wolf at the end there was just wonderful. I mean, it was so sad, but yet, you could just understand that it's what had to be done. And you could just TELL how much Wolf loved him because of what he did. That was simply great.
Secondly, I pretty much love you for the OT3 thing. That scene probably just made my entire day. No wait. Week. At least. Ahaha, I loved the way you built it up. And Wolf was so confused! I have no other words besides YES.
Ok, now that I'm done gushing, I wonder... is this the last chapter? There's no complete on it that I can see, so I'm hoping that means there's gonna be more? I would definitely love more, ahaha, if even just to see how all the rest of the Smashers end up. Like, what's happened to Ike? Is Zelda ok? Is Mario still absolutely crazy? So many questions! Ahaha.
| Basil-Ovelby 6/23/08 . chapter 20
Holy cripes, I feel so bad for Pit! There's absolutely nothing he can do. Even though he did was what right at the end, he's still a bit of an outcast, plus he has to just watch Link and Ganondorf together!
I thought that when Link came over to talk to him, it would like... help him a little, but instead it just made it so much worse! It made me so sad.
Though at the same time I can't help but giggle at his random immature thoughts. Is this really how it's gonna end for Pit?
I can't believe this fic is almost over! It feels like such a short while ago that you just started it. I'm excited for the ending but also sad because then there won't be anymore...
| Wind Kaizer 6/18/08 . chapter 20
This is still very good. In all actuality, one of the best stories that I have read on this site. I feel a little sorry for Pit though, you know. Because he went through all of that just to get back Link, and in the end, he doesn't. Such a let down. If you write a third part to this, maybe you should finally give him someone to be with. (Ike maybe? Although probably you won't do that.) But still, a great story. And that whole 'analogy', 'anal', 'inside of it' thing made me laugh for a good five minutes. Keep up the good work.
| HappyGaylord 6/18/08 . chapter 20
It ends like this? Noo! This can't be! T _ T
But still, after what happened, I guess I shouldn't have expected a happy ending...
I don't think that Dr. Mario will let Pit out for a long time... Especially since he started giggling while Dr. Mario was examening him.
If this was the ending, it was a very good ending (Even though I wanted a happy one)
And I have really enjoyed reading this fic, you're a very good writer!