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| Rosa Cotton 2008-04-11 ch 1,  | abuseWow, that was very unique! What a twist. I liked how you made Anastasia still a mean girl: not protesting to her being the one (though, honestly, I can't picture any girl saying no to marrying a prince), and taking glee in Cinderella's shock and shattered hope. I'm not sure what to make of the prince in this new light. Is he really just very stupid or what? This was well written, and telling it in first-person worked wonderfully. "Cinderella has nothing to keep her warm now, not even hope. I doubt she'll last another night." Amazing last line. Great job done. :) |
| Backroads 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow! I'm not sure how to even respond to this story. But I will let you know that I liked it. I liked it very much indeed. It was well-written and I liked how you kept the step-sister evil. I mean, I appreciate the stories that show the sisters in a different light, but come on, the original fairy tale had them bad! But you didn't dwell on the idea, either. It was very subtle. Excellent idea. |
| Disney Princess3 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseWow that was realy good keep it up.Cinderella is one of my favorite fairy tales. |