Fudge fudge fudge, I'm actually getting addicted to this story, but I'm so glad you end it here so I can finally tear myself away from the computer and back to work :)
It's just the way you write, the way you repeat the phrases and the sentences and the non-existent punctuation in those places where it makes it so...
Argh I can't even say anything you know?
I'm desperate to read more, and yet I also don't want to :(
This describes a Kakashi that I can so believe in, that it hurts because I can :(
Damn damn damn, what will happen next?

The more I read the more heartbroken I get for kakashi.
flip man, this is getting dangerous for him :(

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That senbon through the foot... How Ling is blond, what Kakashi is going through and how Obito was saying how easy it would be and everything, everything adds up to me wanting to bawl my eyes out at your fiction :(

I cried, for dear gosh after Cat apologised :(

After reading the Rockland, I thought I'd check out your other stories but never, oh my dear gosh you made me cry on the first chapter :(

This is so horribly horribly wrong :( And Kakashi is giving so many firsts to his village :(
What about his happiness?

This is about the fifth time I've read the whole story so far-and every time since, including now, I still cry. You paint such an incredibly lovely, heart breaking, dark and twisted scenario, and god knows we all lovelovelovelove it. This is a masterpiece. An update will have me at your feet. Forever. :D
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I enjoy this story so much it worries me...XP There are not many well written stories with such an enthralling introspective quality.

Keep up the good work! I look forward to the next chapter.

bladesofTime <3

Disturbing and completely enthralling. The whole story is well written and intriguing. Great job.

I'm not sure if I have already reviewed but I just wanted to tell you how much i'm enjoying (enjoying is probably not the best word...) this story. You write very well and you portray Kakashi beautifuly, keep up the good work and update soon :)

This is such a sad and distressing story. I feel agitated and upset when reading it, like I'm waiting for the inevitable. I really love this story, though at points it is so horrific. You have such an insight into Kakashi's ordeal, it makes me wonder a little.

wow. very interesting story. plz update soon.

I have nothing constructive to say other than...more? Please? ^_^

Simply haunting. That was amazing how you pulled together all the scenes and brought everything in here. I'm sensing that Kakashi may not get all the closure he wants, but that's just me. Your writing is chilling, and the little thoughts that flutter in every now and then are beautiful. I can envision myself still coming back to this story in twenty years time and enjoying it even more. *applause*

I've Been following this story for a long time and all I can say is WOW. You portray Kakashi in a way most authors would be afraid too and you do an amazing job. Anyway I love the story and please update soon!

This story makes me genuinely depressed. By this I mean that it touches me a little too close to the heart.

All to be taken as compliments, naturally.

I'm expecting Katsu to overwhelm him and make him seek out a prostitute of his own because of the need need need. A possibility?

Fabulously, enticingly too tragic. You've squeezed my heart through a wringer and it's come out entirely the wrong shape. The plight of a genius has never been so engaging a read - the Kakashi behind the mask has such a frail and lose identity that it comes apart at the seams. His encroaching emotions when faced with Minato makes such a stark contrast to the horrible emptiness of his manufactured persona as Katsu. Never thought prostitution and sex could possibly come to be an acquired taste, did he? It's dizzying to read about the extremes (or non-extremes, if you like) of Kakashi's feelings and the delusions he willingly has. Like I said, absolutely fascinating story. I reckon my tears would have dried a salty white on my keyboard by now if I wasn't too horrified to cry. Looking forward to the next update!