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chibichibi k
2008-07-10
ch 1,
abuseThis was really good! I really enjoyed it. I could see this playing out and hey n wonder Butch wuld want Merton, he's a cute-spunky-loveable Goth! I want my own personal Merton. I hope that this isn't your first and last BWOC fanfic cause it was really we written! I'd love to see more. Maybe one in relation to the episode in, I think season 2, where Butch comes back. That'd be cool! Well keep up the writing!
with love - fred
2008-06-19
ch 1,
abuseI could have totally actually seen that happen in the show -- the Butch part, at least. I wish Tommy would really kiss Merton, but, y'know... Great story! I loved it!
YunalanaStarphyer
2008-06-16
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting. I just recently got back into the series and watched the whole series again--in two days... Well, most of it. I couldn't find four of the episodes.
Moving on--When I saw this scene, I was hoping that Butch would suddenly turn around and pull Merton into the film with him--because I love it when stuff happens to Merton. Awkward, yet pleasing plot. Very well-written, descriptive. Not really a fan of slashes, it was a great read.
Mrpointyhorns
2008-06-16
ch 1,
abuseAww that's so cute. It just leaves enough for me to want more.
miki-miki-omo
2008-05-09
ch 1,
abuseaw! s~o~o~o cu~te!! you should totally write another one. this was awesome!
Ladyfox10
2008-04-15
ch 1,
abuseI really like this story! I forgot about that episode. (haven't seen it in a long time) If you do continue, maybe you could do it from the episode 'Butch Is Back.' Just a thought.
peya luna
2008-04-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseyou should really write more for big wolf, your ideas are hilarious. i want that shampoo!! LOLOL
AFY
2008-04-14
ch 1,
abuseMost excellent. Sure the whole Butch wants Merton thing might be a little weird but then this is Merton who we all know is pretty hot in his own ultra-girly way...xD
voxpopuli
2008-04-11
ch 1,
abuseI freaking love you! That was awesome XD
Ninsg Veen
2008-04-09
ch 1,
abuseah
I love your writing. I actually liked the part whole fighting scene. I thought it was well put down ^^
thankzjoez
lunabasketcase
2008-04-08
ch 1,
abuseaww i loved it!
i thought Butch using Merton as a replacment for a girl was a bit odd.
lol
i hope this isnt your last! we need more tommy/merton fics in the world!
peace
sam
Obscurus Lupa
2008-04-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseHeh heh, my favorite part was when Butch smells him and is like, "What is that, vanilla?" Just made me kinda giggle. A neat idea.
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