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| Cheeto Flavored Love 2008-06-02 ch 3, | abusenice! now are they really dwarves, or are they real people? |
| Cheeto Flavored Love 2008-05-23 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter! I like Carr's character. |
| Falsetto 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuse(Hey dude, it's Tilda!)I really like the idea of Snow White having a twin that got cast away because it was ugly, you really should keep working on this one! Though, if I may come with a suggestion. Why make the twin pretty? I mean, it really caught my eye when I read that she was extremely ugly, and then when you added that now she's even prettier than Snow White,and I kind of lost interest. Anyway, you should polish this little gem up, it could turn into a diamond! |
| Cheeto Flavored Love 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseCAn't wait for more!! :D |