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Reviews For: The Devil's Advocate

Cheeto Flavored Love
2008-06-02
ch 3,
abusenice! now are they really dwarves, or are they real people?
Cheeto Flavored Love
2008-05-23
ch 2,
abuseGood chapter! I like Carr's character.
Falsetto
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abuse(Hey dude, it's Tilda!)I really like the idea of Snow White having a twin that got cast away because it was ugly, you really should keep working on this one!
Though, if I may come with a suggestion. Why make the twin pretty? I mean, it really caught my eye when I read that she was extremely ugly, and then when you added that now she's even prettier than Snow White,and I kind of lost interest.
Anyway, you should polish this little gem up, it could turn into a diamond!
Cheeto Flavored Love
2008-04-16
ch 1,
abuseCAn't wait for more!! :D
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