Considering what I've read before by others, my own writing style and tone... Anywhere 13 upwards. It's a wonderful story by the way.

wow Slade is soo beyond fucked up i dont even know how to describe it. poor Xavier, i really hope he finally kills Slade once and for all, or maybe Kory will him! now that would be great! Awesome job my friend! Update soon :D

Wow...I really hate Slade now D:

im so waiting for the next chapter cause each one is a total cliff hanger

OMG PLZ UPDATE SOON I WANNA KNOW WHO THE DADDY IS XD

Im guessing it's Xavier's child but I hope she doesn't keep it. She should just forgive forget and spend her life with Richard.

Is she still naked this whole time?

She really does ask/demand to be let go quite often!

i rely enjoy the suspense you ended this chapter with. I cant wait to read the next chapter.

woah and eww and ugghh
lol cant wait till nxt chapter

awwh
omg ur stories are like never boring
keep on writing girl : D

awh
love your stories, all of your stories!
:D

so hey,
i guess i should have seen that coming considering that there was a practical dream sequence about that. but just to let you know (and i'm not some sick perverted freak, my parents are just in the medical field and want me to be wary) you can determine the father if you recall the time of 'previous events.'

this is also strange, because i found a story in my favorites wondering what it was about considering that i couldn't remember any of it. It was titled, 'Summer Heat' and i practically flipped when i looked at the bottom of your update cause i was reading 'Being with you only brings the tears' i swear i had no idea that you were the same author of those stories. and i found them separately! sorry, i know i'm rambling but this so cool!

adrienne

Sally: 'REALLY evil grin' OH YEAH! That was fuckin WICKED! HA! let's see if you're gonna abort or let it live! I hope it's Slade's child, cause then it'll be AWESOME!
Cross: 'rolls eyes' She's gone manic again. Still, nice twist in the story. It's GOOD.
Gabriel: I agree with Cross. Although I think Kory misunderstood what Xavier did. Aw well, we'll see.
Sally: 'EVIL LAUGH'

P.S. Thanks for the review.

well i hope the baby is Xavier's because i don't think Kory could handle having Slade's child...but whoever the baby's father is i hope she doesnt get an abortion...not cool. awesome job and update soon :-D