Aw, I love it. It's so majestic. I love Michael and Annie.

Aww. (: This was so sweet, everything Michael said about stars and magic..it just makes me so happy and spirited! Like I'm a star too! :D

YAY! IT'S NOT OVER! :D This almost made me cry, but if Michael DID start crying, then I would stArt crying. XD I love this story soo much!

Please update ASAP! (:

Your welcome.:)Oh that was a wicked cliffie!Can't wait for the next shot whom I wonder?

OHMYFREAKINGGOSH! YOU UPDATED!

NO! ANNIE! MICHAEL! GAHH!

Lideo is looking for Annie?Oh boy,this can't be he remembers her some after you're feeling better soon.:)

AWW. XD I loved chapters 1-3! They were so sweet and mysterious! I hope you update, because it's not once in a while you see an Michael Jackson story. XD

O.O! DSHJKLFHJDLGFDS;F/. OHHMYZERS! Surprising Ending! Whao. ...LMAO. Sweet Angel. XD Well it IS true that Michael's a sweet angel .!

Update soon! :D

Oh gosh. I HAD TO REVIEW THIS ONE! IT''S SOO CUTE! XDD Okay...so...YAY A MICHAEL JACKSON STORY :D! I've always wanted to read one. (: This is interesting. I've always wondered why he said Annie in Smooth Criminal. S: hehe. I'm off to read the next chapter! (:

Frank Lideo is her father? He would hurt his own daughter like that? Or even allow it to happen? Damn!:(

Omigosh. Michael! I can't believe this, this is so awesome. HURRY! WRITE MORE! :D

She's well again!I hope that Michael kicks butt!:)

How Annie! Smooth Operator is one of my favorite Michael Jackson videos.

OMG! I can't believe you habe NO coments! This is soo good. It may just be the first chapter, but I love it! Good job! MJ and Moonwalker ROCK!