It really good and sad makes me wanna cry. Poor Jakey!

I love it:)

Luv the story so u have to write more real soon. luv ya
xx

wow that wuzz awsome! write more plzz!

Hey,Um.. can you add more to this cause i think i fell in love with it!

Jess-E

Hello,

First I would just like to say I love this story it is so I would just like to add that you are such a talented also again I would like to add that I love this story.

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO EDWARD! NO SHELL KILL THE KIDS!

Kay Im done, love your story keep writing!

AAVl

No, No, Not shopping!

AH-sniff-

Oh, Jacobs gunna be Ma-ad!

i know im later for this chapter 8 but how could bella be so cold hearted her ex boyfriend father of her child and best friend just died and all she can do is cry for 20 minutes i feel like kicking her in the butt and then when her father calls her to confirm that jacob is dead shes laughing and giggling and then gets mad when charlie makes the error of calling jacob her boyfriend. shes acting like a true biotch not only did she leave jacob for edward that she hasnt seen in five years in one day she decides tomove in with edward take away his daughter and leave him for his worst enemy who just took away his whole life . and to have his daughter call his worst enemy dada they expect him to be handy dandy note book... i probly would have killed myself to. bella is a selfish idiot who only cares about herself , edward and the cullens jacob has feelings to . bellas a cold blooded hefa... abd thats the reason i love this story it so ooc but it portray's such emotion its a wonder ful story with beautiful writing now excuse me i have to finish reading your story

I LOVE HOW THE STORY CONTINUED! U R SO TALENTED! PLEASE KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMING!

Can't Wait for the next chapter it's an AWSOME story

THAT WAS GREAT!

oh this is amazing its so good update soon.