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1Timberwolf
2009-11-23 . chapter 24
Wow, so glad to see another chapter. I always wondered what was under his mask, thank you for your take on it. The way Karbunkle is I could clearly see him doing something as sick as that. Looking forward to more.
Zuzanny
2009-11-23 . chapter 24
yeah. that kind of scar makes more sence, and is very understandable for wanting a mask.
Kaysin-12
2009-11-22 . chapter 24
What an original idea! And totally believable given how sadistic and juvenile the Karbunkle character had a tendancy to be. You started out awesome and just keep getting better with each chapter! ^_^
Duvet
2009-11-22 . chapter 24
Terrible view of why Vinnie got his mask. A shudder came down my spine and my breakfast isn't so yummy any more :)- just kidding.
Great chapter. Can't wait for more:)

Update!
Cat 2
2009-11-22 . chapter 24
Poor Vinnie. Good take on what's under his mask.
griff-chan
2009-11-21 . chapter 24
I always wonder what is under Vinnie's mask. This sounds as good an explanation as any and is totally something Karbunkle would do.

Nice add to the series =)
Jovianokamigirl
2009-11-21 . chapter 24
They never did say what was under the mask or even give really hints. But at lest ya give some clue or an idea what could be under there. And how Vinnie was a shame of it.
RockNRide
2009-11-21 . chapter 24
Yay for the update! I love these moments and this one was perfect. Beautifully written as always.


~ Jen
elloh
2009-11-21 . chapter 24
All I can say is... damn. Good piece.
Duvet
2009-11-03 . chapter 22
Come on!! Update some more :DD These are my favorite stories :P I have lately came back to Biker Mice from Mars as I have watched them as a small girl. :)
Kaysin-12
2009-11-01 . chapter 23
The main character in Avatar once said, "You're a mad genius!" He must have been talking about you. That was awesome, I can always count on you when I need a smile, thanks. ^_^
Rainbowluvr17
2009-10-31 . chapter 23
O.O *3 second delay* BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Oh...A Power Ranger, A Clown & the Bride of Frankenstein?! How much more cruelty can those 3 withstand?!

I feel bad for Throttle most of all...it's hard to pull off a Power Ranger costume.

Can't wait to read more hi-jinks featuring our 3 fave bikers.
Zuzanny
2009-10-31 . chapter 23
LOL!
griff-chan
2009-10-30 . chapter 23
I swear, the image of Modo as the bride will disturb me to the end of time o,O

But I was amused. Female impersonators, indeed.
Duvet
2009-10-30 . chapter 23
I love you!! :D You updated :) I love these stories :)
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