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Reviews for: Breaking
MusicLover27
2009-08-06 . chapter 1
Awsome start, I love the way this is written, it's so unique! Hope you update soon.
hisokauzumaki
2009-05-02 . chapter 1
Please update this!

i really want to see where this goes!!
Lady Gallatea Ravenclaw
2009-03-06 . chapter 1
God. :D Very good. Please update soon!
FictionalRemnant
2009-03-01 . chapter 1
What! You can’t just end it there. You’ve left me in suspense, I’m not exactly sure of what. Maybe seeing Harry mending and moving on or something. Some more Bobby and Winchesters would have helped I think. :D

The story was good. I liked how you portrayed Harry and his feelings. I always felt Harry was to well adjusted after Deathly Hallows, even though you don’t really see what he’s like; however I would imagine he would be a little broken. And man it tugged a heart string when you said something about just being the weirdo boy that stood as close as he could to feel some of the warmth. Hell, that whole discussion with his friends was sad.

And I was just wondering. Why was it Slughorn that was telling Harry what to do? Why was Harry even at Hogwarts talking with him?

Anywho, Great Job!
Exodiano
2008-09-15 . chapter 1
A good short story! Please, write a sequel! Please! *pouts*
AbNaGbEyL
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
Can I request a sequel? This is WAY to good to let stand alone!
fireangel1423
2008-06-25 . chapter 1
i love it.
I would love to see this become more then a one-shot.
maybe a series.
vballmania23
2008-06-17 . chapter 1
It's chilling and sad and oh so perfect! Great story.
insanechildfanfic
2008-04-09 . chapter 1
I'm reserving any judgement and keeping an open mind for now
Ecc0
2008-04-09 . chapter 1
Very good start so far this story has really piqued my interest and I'm really looking forward to see how this story develops. The only thing that i think may need a bit more work is setting description, in the last part of the story i was a little lost (but who knows i can some times get lost in my room ^_^;) So please keep up with the good work and encourage that little plot bunny for futur chapters!
Pheonix Eternia
2008-04-08 . chapter 1
I like this. Are you going to leave it a one-shot? Maybe just one more chapter?
Lindblom
2008-04-08 . chapter 1
OMG! yes, so twisted and broken and just so sad... you have to continue, really it would be so interesting when he finally meet the brothers. Aw. please continue
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