I think this story is so sad!

I liked it, but too many Japanese words.

the summary sounds like inuyasha...

THEY-THEY DIED?! Aw, that's sad. Especially when shinji was holding hikari while she was dying, you know, I thought the crystal would make a force field or something tp save hikari but this ending fits too.

especially the scene in the grave yard, that was very kawaii! yet uber sad T.T

I LURVED THIS STORY! KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK! XD

Can't say you've done the ending badly because I somehow liked the fact that Shinji can't seem to live without Hikari. Poor Reiji though, he lost a brother.

Good job on the Epilogue! :D

Aw it almost made me cry ;__; I didn't expect the end to be so sad xD It was beautiful anyway, great job serebii-san, thanks for keeping it up till the end n_n

TOO SAD, but it was a beautiful ending though. I was longing to read the end and now I did, I'm satisfied. Tnx I loved it

OMG why didn't I see this before? Damn my parents 4 not letting me go on the internet as often.
Anyways this was AWESOME! OMG it's so good I can't even describe it :)

NO T_T HOW DARE YOU LET HIKARI DIE? *Hunts you down* ;-P nice story ^^

Ack. That was just... sad. D:

Oh well. D: Poor Shinji though.

Anyways, nice fic. :D hehe.

AH! EVIl! That was so evil of you >.

Aww a cliffie D: That's evil :o) Can't wait for the next chap xD

EVIL!

CLIFFHANGER! D:

Ah, well. Can't blame you. XD Haha. Saturn is so getting excited to kill someone. XD

Update soon!

** Shinji...

... OMFG. D:

Scary. DX

KengoxShinji. *snort*

Oh, she has to die just so Shinji will get the crystal?

... Dilemma. ._.